{review} Calling ninetyseven
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Love Can Be a Miracle by ninetyseven
Title (3/5)
I've seen this title lots of times, but it fits the story, so I gave you extra points for that reason.
Appearance (3/5)
I think your poster would've looked better if you added a background color. Other than that, all I know from the poster is that Yoona and Gunwoo are the stars of the film. This is all I can get from the poster, and it doesn't quite appeal in my eyes.
Description/Foreword (13/15)
First of all, I love your description and foreword. It's perfect! It gives off a summary that introduces the reader to the story, yet it doesn't reveal the whole story. I also love the foreword, since it's simple, but it tells the readers what they're in for. The thing I docked off points for was the character information. You should show the readers rather than telling them the character's personality. It makes your writing more powerful when you show them your characters instead of telling them what kind of personality they have.
Plot (24/25)
The plot was definitely unique. It was a fanfic completely new to me, and I'm glad that it wasn't cliché!
Characters (13/15)
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