{review} Calling ninetyseven

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Love Can Be a Miracle by ninetyseven

Title (3/5)

I've seen this title lots of times, but it fits the story, so I gave you extra points for that reason.

 

Appearance (3/5)

I think your poster would've looked better if you added a background color. Other than that, all I know from the poster is that Yoona and Gunwoo are the stars of the film. This is all I can get from the poster, and it doesn't quite appeal in my eyes.

 

Description/Foreword (13/15)

First of all, I love your description and foreword. It's perfect! It gives off a summary that introduces the reader to the story, yet it doesn't reveal the whole story. I also love the foreword, since it's simple, but it tells the readers what they're in for. The thing I docked off points for was the character information. You should show the readers rather than telling them the character's personality. It makes your writing more powerful when you show them your characters instead of telling them what kind of personality they have.

 

Plot (24/25)

The plot was definitely unique. It was a fanfic completely new to me, and I'm glad that it wasn't cliché! 

 

Characters (13/15)

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500sunny500
#1
@reeseee3: Sorry! We're closed! >.< However, we made a new request shop right here:
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/231323
The forms are the same, so you can just copy and paste! :D
500sunny500
#2
@scarlettwolf: I think I understand what you mean. However, in our current generation, we use single spaces instead of double spaces. Double spaces were used a long time ago because it was harder to tell if the punctuations were single spaced. Nowadays, we can easily tell the spaces because each key on your keyboard uses up to same. I'm not sure if I got your point, but here's the link where I got all this information: http://desktoppub.about.com/cs/typespacing/a/onetwospaces.htm
scarlettwolf
#3
It appears to be AFF... =/ (at least in the comments)
Well anyways, as long as you know about it(like how to double space), I'm fine with it.
scarlettwolf
#4
hmm...
Well, I think it's AFF. It looks like there is only one space when there are really two...
It's in every chapter I think too. But it seems it's AFF...
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
Hi. I'm scarlettwolf
500sunny500
#5
@scarlettwolf: We're not exactly sure what you're talking about. ^^;; Would you please mind pointing out the chapter we made our mistake on?
scarlettwolf
#6
AYO! ^^
Not really gonna say too much, and I have no idea if this is just AFF being weird, but after a period, exclamation mark, etc. you need to have double spacing. Like right there.
Maybe it's just AFF formatting, I couldn't really tell... ._.
ShanghaiTiger
#7
I'll credit you tomorrow, okay?
ShanghaiTiger
#8
thanks :)