I'm Losing My Mind by Cutie-Liyin

Title (0/5)

I have three problems to this story that I listed below:

1. The title is cliché, and it's not attention-grabbing. I would definitely skip this story if I ever saw this type of title.

2. Stick with one title. The second title (the korean one) doesn't make any sense, either. I know because I'm a Korean person, and I speak decent Korean. Just delete the Korean title and stick to the English title.

3. Delete the symbols. It makes the title look messy. It's best to have a nice, solid title than a title with a bunch of random symbol(s) in it.

Appearance (3/5)

I like the poster, but it's a bit messy. I also like how the "losing" is animated, too.

Description/Foreword (3/15)

First of all, you have tons of spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors in your description. I think you "abuse" the exclamation mark too much. It's also very complicated, and I hardly understood the "summary" of the story.

Now to your foreword. It tells me nothing about the story. Author notes shouldn't be in the foreword or description unless it's an important note relating to the story. 

Plot (1/25)

The plot bored me. Not only that, but I couldn't understand it. I wanted to skip the chapters, hoping that the next chapter can clear up the questions I had.

Characters (5/15)

Since I didn't understand the plot, I don't understand the character's personalities either. However, most of the characters are pretty cliché, especially the guys. You can find the guy's personalities and characteristics in most romance fanfics.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (0/20)

I can't give you any points in this section. Your story has a lot of flaws, and as a reviewer, I can't bring myself to lie and add points. You really need a co-author or someone to look over your chapters and fix your writing. Not only that, but you also show your readers that you're a weak writer. For an examp