Carnivorous by FallingArrows

Title (4/5)

The title is simple, unique, and matches with the mood of your story. Though if I was to come across this story, I wouldn't have clicked on it. It doesn't really spark some interest in me.

Appearance (4.5/5)

I just got to say…I LOVE THE POSTER! It gives off a horror, dark feelings. The only problem I have is that when it turns blurry, it kind of bugs me. I mean, in my opinion, I don't think that the blur effect is needed, but that is totally up to you.

Description/Foreword (11/15)

Your description was fine. It gave a good summary of the story, and at the same time didn't reveal too much. The only thought I had about your description was why you summarized your story twice.

Your foreword was amazing! I love the way you described about the blood and the verbs you used. It really gave the readers a good taste of what they would be reading and anticipate them for the first chapter. However, the author's notes wasn't needed, though, so I docked off a few points. 

Plot (25/25)

First of all, this story isn't like any plot I had read. It's very unique. So unique, that it seems to be the one-of-the-kind type of fanfics out here. I love the storyline. I'm always anticipating for the next chapter, and