Are You Up For The Challenges by PerrythePlatypus

Title (4/5)

It should be, "Are You Up For the Challenges?" instead of, "Are You Up For The Challenges?" The title isn't very catchy. It's pretty plain, and I would've skipped this story if I came through this. However, I can't argue with the fact that the title relates to your story.

Appearance (5/5)

I like the poster. It's simple, tells you the character, the title, the author, etc. 

Description/Foreword (13/15)

I don't think the author's note was necessary, except for the credits. That's why I docked off two points. Other than that, the foreword and description was wonderful. They both grabbed my attention, and I felt my heart thumping with excitement.

Plot (22/25)

To be honest, this seems like the "Hunger Games" kind of story, where random contestants are chosen and gather up to fight for their lives. However, you don't really see these kind of fanfics here on AFF. 

Characters (11/15)

The characters are kind of boring. They just seem really normal and similar to other fanfics here on AFF. However, you only updated two chapters, so this is all I can get from the characters.

Writing (Spelling/Grammar/Punctuation) (17/20)

You didn't have big errors that would confuse the readers. Your errors were pretty minor.

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