Harbour by KPossible21

Title (4/5)

The title is simple, connects to the plot of the story, and I don't think I've ever encountered a title like this.  You could've gotten full points for this section, but there was a small problem. When using the English language, you spell "harbour" as "harbor". It's not wrong to say "harbour," but it isn't the correct use in the English language.

Appearance (--/5)

You didn't have a poster, background, banner, or anything like that, so I didn't include any points in this section.

Description/Foreword (7/15)

I like how that one quote in your description almost summarized about what your story is going to be. However, I took most points off because of the foreword. Usually, I don't take off points when it comes to crediting in author's notes, but if there is an author's note that doesn't clarify anything about the story, I take points off. From your foreword, I can only tell that you got reviews from three places, you want the readers to enjoy your story and leave feedbacks, and that you are the owner of the story. I can't find anything in the foreword that will tell me what the story is about.

Plot (25/25)

To be honest, I've encountered many fanfics that included pregnancy. However,