Deadly Deal: Hidden Love by PixieDream

Title (4/5)

I've seen these kind of titles before, so it doesn't really interest me. So far, I only understand how "Deadly Deal" relates to the story, but not the "Hidden Love" part.

Appearance (0/5)

The font is hard to read, Sandara is pretty blurry, and…Okay, let me just say that you need a better poster. All I can get from this poster is that there's G-Dragon and Sandara in this fanfic.

Description/Foreword (6/15)

First of all, take out the author's note about saying that it's not your first time in AFF and etc. That's not needed in the description.

Second of all, if it's rated, you rate the whole story. You don't just say that the story is rated at the bottom of the page. The rule states that you should rate the story for mature contents, which includes extreme violence and ual activity.

Other than that, I found parts of the description confusing. For an example, in the foreword I couldn't tell if the text switched from paragraph to paragraph until I read it through multiple of times.

Plot (23/25)

I could've given you full points if you haven't made the deal between the devil and Ji Yong. There are a ton of fanfics out there where when a character dies, he or she makes a deal with the devil or whoever and is given a chance to live. However, I gave you most points because I kind of like how the girl is suffering because of his "death," but he has to make her own life suffer.

Characters (10/15)

The characters aren't really unique. However, I do love Ji Yong's character here in this story.