Chapter 15: I thought Daeyeol would bullied her back but he just let her do it to him. I love how cheesy he can be. Our leader daeyeol is really something. Anyway, i think this story still worth to read though. I thought it will be more dark since bully is a heavy topic to discuss. But it's okay since i can still understand how the flow of this story was going.
Don't give up on writing, okay? You got such a talent and don't let it go waste. Like people said 'practice makes perfect'. Hope you will improve more better soon. Sincerely, i love this!! ^^
Chapter 2: Hi! ~
Just another random readers passing by :). So far i like the theme and synopsis of this stories and i must say i'm quite curious about where's this story might lead to ^^
Nice plot but need some improvements. To me, the writing style could be a little bit more matured since this is kind of dark stories which portrayed bullism as the main theme along with the broken MC who's had so much flaws. Also, author could insert MC p.o.v of what MC thought at that time. In addition, author could applies some interesting writing skills such as metaphor and personafication to make these stories more appealing.
That's all from me, >< i'm sorry if you find my grammar irritating as english is not my prime language. >< Last but not least, i love your works and keep up the good effort author-nim! :)) HWAITING!
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