Conflict

Boys Over Flower 2
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Sung Jae became lost in the forest because he got separated from his team. They were supposed to be in their way to the 4th station when Sung Jae wandered too far away from his team.

                “Aisshh. Seriously, where on hell are they?” Sung Jae complained. “It even started to rain. Great! This sure is my lucky day. Where is that stupid large tree anyway?” He added.

Sung Jae continued on wandering until he heard something or someone rather. He came towards the noise he heard and he realized that there was more than one making the noises. He heard that the persons making the noises were actually arguing with each other. When he was nearing the place, he could now see the largest tree.

                “Alright! So that’s where you are, TREE! Heh, my team would definitely be surprised seeing me arriving here ahead of them.” Sung Jae exclaimed and he noticed that the voices he heard have gone silent.

Sung Jae arrived to where the largest tree was located and he was so shocked seeing So Hyun and Joo Hyuk there. He saw Joo Hyuk leaning to kiss So Hyun so he quickly ran to them and grabbed Joo Hyuk’s arms.

                “I’ll kill you!” Sung Jae had punched Joo Hyuk on the face.

                “What the..” Joo Hyuk was now sitting on the ground, feeling his injured cheek.

                “Nam Joo Hyuk! Yook Sung Jae!” So Hyun was horrified.

At the other side of the forest:

                “AHHHHHH!!!” Suhyun and Junhue screamed, hugging each other.

                “Yah!” Chanhyuk came out from the bushes and followed by his other teammates. “Why are you two screaming?” He asked. “And why are you hugging each other?” Chanhyuk eyed them suspiciously.

As soon as Chanhyuk mentioned about the two of them hugging each other, both Suhyun and Jun Hue automatically looked at each other and pushed each other away right after.

                “Ewww! Yuck! Gross!” Suhyun grimaced. “Did you really just hug me? Just look at my outfit? It’s all smudged with your mud from that dirty swamp!” Suhyun complained, looking at Jun Hue disgustingly.

                “Ugh! Me? Hugged you? It was you who hugged me first!” Jun Hue countered.

                “Seriously, stop it you two.” Chanhyuk demanded. “Has either of you seen Sung Jae?” He asked.

                “No.” Both Suhyun and Jun Hue answered at the same time and glared at each other.

                “Seriously! That Yook Sung Jae is a pain in the .” Chanhyuk exclaimed. “He got separated from us and eventually got himself lost.” Chanhyuk continued, seeing Jun Hue’s questioning look.

                “And I can see that Sung Jae’s not the only one who got himself lost around here.” Jin Hwan added, looking at Suhyun and Jun Hue knowingly and they didn’t answer.

                “What? You two are lost too?” Chanhyuk asked incredulously. “God! You’re so hopeless. Come on then. Join us for now and we might just find your team on the way.” Chanhyuk offered and the two came along with them.

As soon as Suhyun, Jun Hue, Chan Hyuk and his team arrived at the 4th station, they were surprised seeing the commotion. They saw Sung Jae tackling Joo Hyuk and pinning him on the ground but then Chan Woo grabbed Sung Jae away from Joo Hyuk but was having a hard time holding him back.

                “Jin Hwan!” Chan Woo called. “Help me stop them.” He demanded and Jin Hwan came immediately.

                “What happened?” This time, Jun Hue joined in to stop the quarrel, grabbing Sung Jae too.

                “I don’t know! I just saw them like this when we arrived.” Chan Woo answered, still grabbing Sung Jae back.

                “Joo Hyuk! Sung Jae! Stop this, already!” Jin Hwan shouted, grabbing Joo Hyuk back but they just ignored them and kept on grabbing each other’s shirt. “Aisshh. Seriously! What’s wrong with you two?” He exclaimed exhaustedly.

Suhyun and the rest were so shocked that they just kept on staring at the boys until Suhyun and Chanhyuk saw So Hyun. So Hyun was on her knees covering her face with her hands. The twins automatically went to her.

                “So Hyun-ah! Are you okay?” Suhyun asked as soon as she came to her side.

                “Do you know what happened between them?” Chan Hyuk asked this time.

                “I.. I’m not sure. I.. We..” So Hyun stammered hysterically.

                “Shhh.. It’s going to be okay.” Suhyun comforted, hugging her friend. “Stop asking her, Hyukie! Can’t you see she’s in shock?” Suhyun turned to her brother and gave him an accusing look.

                “What’s going on here?” From out of nowhere, Teacher Lee appeared. “I came here to let everyone know that the race has been cancelled because of the heavy rain.” He announced. “But just look at this mess? Nam Joo Hyuk and Yook Sung Jae, you two better follow me.” Teacher Lee demanded and the two of them followed grumpily.

Back at the camp:

                “SUSPENSION?” Sung Jae’s friends asked in unison, except Donghyuk who was sitting silently.

Sung Jae and his friends were sitting around a small campfire that Donghyuk had made. It was the last night for their camp and the rain have finally stopped so the teachers decided to let the students do what they want for the night except to wander around outside the camp.

                “For how long?” Bi asked right after.

                “For a week.” Sung Jae simply answered.

                “Dude, that’s awesome!” Jun Hue exclaimed excitedly and all his friends stared at him like he was crazy. “It’s not that I’m happy about Sung Jae being suspended. I’m actually JEALOUS!” He added.

                “Aisshh.. You’re talking nonsense Jun Hue-ah.” Bobby said and Dong Hyuk nodded beside him.

                “Think about it, you guys. Our summer vacation will start after a week right? Sung Jae will have his vacation a week earlier! How’s that! You really are lucky, Yook Sung Jae.” Jun Hue stated and all his friends just scowled at him.

                “What about that Nam Joo Hyuk?” Bi asked and Sung Jae made an angry face.

                “He got 1 week of suspension too.” Sung Jae answered, gritting his teeth.

                “Seriously though. I can’t believe that he tried to kiss my cousin! That bastard.” Bobby exclaimed.

When they were huddled together around the campfire, Sung Jae told them what happened just before the brawl between him and Joo Hy

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.