The Danger That Lurks

Boys Over Flower 2
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“I just couldn’t sleep thinking about you.”

                “I care about you, don’t you get that?”

It was already 3:00 am but So Hyun was still wide awake. She kept on hearing the words that Joo Hyuk and Sung Jae had said to her that clearly showed their feelings towards her. She couldn’t sleep at all, thinking about them and the feelings she have for the both of them. She started to get confused and she felt terrible about it. She kept on thinking and thinking and thinking.. Until she finally fell asleep.

                “Wake up!” So Hyun could hear someone. “Wake up, you lazy bum.” So Hyun finally opened her eyes.

                “Good morning sunshine!” Suhyun greeted and So Hyun sat up from her bed lazily.

                “Geez, I thought you have a sleeping curse or something. You’re so hard to wake up.” Sung Kyoung accused.

                “Oh. So Sung Kyoung was the one who called me a lazy bum.” So Hyun thought, rolling her eyes.

                “Are you feeling sick So Hyun-ah? Why are you still in bed at this hour?” Hayi asked.

                “Why?” So Hyun asked groggily. “What time is it exactly?” She continued.

                “It’s 1:00 pm.” Hayi answered.

                “What? That late?” So Hyun was shocked. “But what are you guys doing here? Barging in my room like this.” So Hyun accused but the three girls were just looking back at her excitedly.

                “We’re going shopping!” Suhyun exclaimed enthusiastically.

So Hyun, Hayi, Suhyun and Sung Kyoung were in a mall. The four girls were so happy to be together, shopping and having fun. It has been a long time since they got to go out just the four of them. After shopping, they decided to go in a cafe just inside the mall. They decided to sit just outside the store. Sung Kyoung and Hayi were already seated while So Hyun and Suhyun were still ordering inside the store for their foods and drinks. As soon as they got out from the store, So Hyun felt a presence hovering around and she scanned the place to look but again, there was none.

                “What is it?” Suhyun asked.

                “It’s just.. It’s nothing.” So Hyun lied.

So Hyun and Suhyun reached their friends and sat directly to their seats. So Hyun and Suhyun sat side by side while Sung Kyoung and Hayi were seated just in front of So Hyun and Suhyun respectively.

                “What’s wrong? You’re having a weird face.” Sung Kyoung commented.

                “I know, right? But she wouldn’t tell me.” Suhyun accused.

                “It’s not that serious, okay?” So Hyun assured but the girls just gave her their knowing looks. “Fine. These past few days I felt like someone was following me where ever I go.” So Hyun confessed.

                “What? Who?” Hayi asked, worried.

                “Oh, come on! She might just be imagining things.” Sung Kyoung stated, sipping her frappe.

                “Exactly! That’s why I didn’t want to tell you in the first place!” So Hyun accused.

                “Come now, dear. Let’s just all enjoy our frappe, okay? And after this, we shall continue shopping.” Suhyun suggested and the others started to scowl at her direction.

                “Haven’t had enough? Seriously! Do you really want to empty the mall?” Sung Kyoung exclaimed.

                “Oh, if you only knew. I could do this all day!” Suhyun declared.

                “Just give it up, Kyoungie-ah. You know Suhyun is a shopaholic so you shouldn’t be surprised at all.” So Hyun reminded, shaking her head.

                “Umm.. Guys? Shouldn’t we worry about the lurking unknown person who’s after So Hyun?” Hayi asked.

                “Aissh. Yah, Soo Hayi. Didn’t you hear what everyone had concluded? It’s just So Hyun’s wild imagination!” Sung Kyoung stated. “After all, So Hyun is quite imaginative and wild.” She added and snickered.

                “Yah! What do you mean by that?” So Hyun accused.

                “I don’t know guys. I just felt threatened all of a sudden. What if So Hyun’s imagination is true? What if someone’s after her? Or us? And worse, he might be a secret assassin whose mission is to kill us!” Hayi said, wearing a horrified look and the girls just looked at her like she was crazy.

                “THAT.. Is what I call a WILD imagination.” So Hyun exclaimed and Sung Kyoung nodded in agreement.

                “Hayi-ah, do you still need some coffee? I guess you need some more.” Suhyun said. “Here, you can have mine.” She added, giving her the half full cappuccino frappe.

                “Oh! Thanks Suhyun-ah.” Hayi accepted the drink happily.

After having their snack, they continued on shopping. They were inside a clothing store – The YG Fashion Boutique. The place was a lot bigger compared to a regular boutique. It was designed like of that in a house made of mahogany. It was lighted with a large crystal chandelier and the ambiance was refreshing. They even have a small cafe for the customers.

                “Wow! As expected from YG.” Suhyun praised. “Yoon Sung Kyoung.. You lucky wench!” Suhyun was jealous of Sung Kyoung being the model for the YG clothing line but Sung Kyoung just ignored her.

Sung Kyoung was not in the mood because of her period (menstruation). She needed to go to the bathroom so she grabbed Hayi with her while So Hyun and Suhyun stayed and waited for them to return. When Sung Kyoung was in the cubicle, she told herself that she needed to change but she didn’t have an extra napkin with her.

                “!” Sung Kyoung cursed.

                “What’s wrong, Kyoungie-ah?” Hayi asked from outside the cubicle.

                “Hayi-ah, do you have some spare napkin with you? I forgot to bring an extra with me.” Sung Kyoung exclaimed.

                “Oh. I’m afraid I don’t have any but I can bring you one.” Hayi stated. “I’ll be right back.” She added and left.

So Hyun was busy choosing a dress when she saw Hayi passed by the window store. She noticed that Hayi was in a hurry and Sung Kyoung wasn’t with her. She became worried and decided to follow Hayi but ended up losing her.

                “Great! Now I lost her and what’s worse, I lost my way. Where the hell am I?” So Hyun thought.

So Hyun was about turn back from where she came from but she again felt like someone was watching her. She stopped from walking and she could hear footsteps along with hers but it stopped as soon as she stopped walking. She started to get scared and tried to scan her surroundings. There weren’t much people so she immediately spotted a man in black, wearing a face mask and sunglasses. She panicked and started running until she saw a sign indicating a Comfort Room and quickly ran inside. So Hyun entered one of the cubicles and locked it. She stayed inside until she heard someone.

                “Kyoungie-ah!” So Hyun heard Hayi’s voice. “I brought the napkin that you need.” Hayi informed.

So Hyun felt relieved hearing Hayi’s voice but she suddenly flinched in surprise when Sung Kyoung cursed. So Hyun was worried so she immediately got out from the cubicle she was

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.