Consequences

Boys Over Flower 2
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It was 4:30 in the afternoon and almost all the students were on their own club activities. So Hyun, Suhyun, Hayi, and Sung Kyoung were on their way to their enemies’ lounge to get their revenge. As they came near, they saw Sung Jae and his friends entering their lair. They went closer and hid themselves behind the nearest wall.

                “Okay, they have entered the room. All we have to do is press this button here.” So Hyun gestured to the remote control she was holding and all the other girls gulped.

                “It’s now or never.” Suhyun agreed.

                “I’m not so sure about what’s going to happen, but I’m kind of excited.” Hayi stated, clapping her hands.

                “It’s time to strike back. Light those ers up!” Sung Kyoung cheered and So Hyun pressed the button.

Sung Jae and his friends were having their own sweet time inside the lounge. Dong Hyuk was sleeping on the couch. Jun Hue and Bi were playing billiards. Bobby was sitting on a sofa near the glass window and has his headphones on, listening to music while reading some book. Sung Jae was just standing near the window where Bobby was sitting. He was staring into nothingness and his friends knew better not to bother him about what happened.

                “Do you smell that?” Dong Hyuk suddenly asked, sitting up that startled his friends.

                “Yah! Dong Hyuk woke up! And he spoke!” Jun Hue was dumbfounded.

                “What’s the matter, Dong Hyuk-ah?” Sung Jae asked, alarmed.

Bobby still has his headphones on so he didn’t really heard Dong Hyuk spoke but he noticed the smoke coming out from under the table near the C.R just behind the couch where Dong Hyuk was sleeping.

                “Smoke! There’s smoke coming from there!” Bobby gestured to where he saw the smoke coming out.

Everyone noticed it too and they started to panic. Dong Hyuk stood and ran away from the couch and stayed near his friends. They noticed that the smoke was getting heavier and bigger that they could barely see the exit.

                “Fire! There’s a fire! What are we going to do?” Jun Hue shouted.

                “Fire? But where does it come from? We should put it out!” Bi stated, coughing.

                “The windows! Open them up!” Bobby demanded and they did.

                “Waahh! Let’s get out of here! I don’t want to die!” Jun Hue cried out and was about to jump out on the window but Bi and Dong Hyuk pulled him back quickly.

                “Idiot! It’s a 5 storey high building! You’ll be dead if you jump this high!” Bi scolded.

                “Everyone, head for the exit. We should inform everyone about the fire.” Sung Jae decided and everyone started to move, feeling everything they touch on the way.

The five of them was coughing and tearing now because of the smoke. Even though the windows were already opened, it still wasn’t enough to make them see the exit. They stumbled and fell many times but they still couldn’t find the exit.

                “! Our lounge is too big.” Sung Jae thought.

They were about to give up but suddenly, the door opened and they could see five silhouettes entering the room. The five of them stared at each other, feeling hesitant at first but they heard a familiar voice.

                “Over here!” Sung Jae heard Chan Hyuk’s voice.

Sung Jae and his friends immediately followed where the voice came from and they could finally see the figures from the exit and ran towards them. Smoke started to come out from the opened door and all of them started to get away from it. After a moment of catching their breaths, the boys finally saw the faces of those silhouettes they saw.

                “You!” Sung Jae looked at So Hyun and her friends.

                “Yes, us. I hope you enjoyed that.” So Hyun countered.

Sung Jae was shocked after knowing that So Hyun and her friends were behind the smoke prank. He was about to say something but suddenly, the fire alarm rang and they all looked where the fire alarm button was located. On the fire alarm button, Jun Hue’s finger was still pressing.

                “Jun Hue! What’re you doing?” Sung Jae was horrified.

                “Pressing the alarm of course! There’s fire for heaven’s sake!” Jun Hue answered still panicking.

                “Those were just smoke bombs, you !” Sung Kyoung shouted and caught Jun Hue’s arms, putting them down. “Thanks to you, the whole school would know!” She continued.

They all started to get nervous as they heard screaming. Hearing the alarm and seeing the smoke coming from the windows, the students started to panic and ran. Some students got injured because of stampede and some had fainted. They were about to go and clear the misunderstanding but when they turned around, they all saw Gu Jun Hee standing in front of them wearing a face they never saw before.

                “All of you, in my office. NOW!” Jun Hee shouted.

At the Chairwoman’s Office:

So Hyun, Sung Kyoung, Hayi, Suhyun, Chan Hyuk, Bobby, Bi, Jun Hue, Dong Hyuk and Sung Jae were sitting on the sofas facing the table and the chair where Gu Jun Hee was sitting. They were all staring at each other quietly. Nobody dared to talk in that kind of situation they were in. They were all nervous and scared because the Chairwoman still haven’t s

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.