Ransom

Boys Over Flower 2
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“Mom? What are you doing?” Yoo Jung suddenly put herself in between her friends and her mother. “Put the gun down. Mom, please." She pleaded.

So Hyun, Joo Hyuk and Sung Jae were just about to escape but Jang Yu Mi suddenly showed up with a gun in her hands, pointing directly at So Hyun’s direction. Sung Jae automatically placed himself in between the gun and Joo Hyuk who was carrying So Hyun in his arms at that moment. Seeing the gun pointing at Sung Jae, Yoo Jung went to place herself in front of Sung Jae, blocking her mother’s view of her friends.

                “Get out of the way, Yoo Jung-ah!” Yoo jung’s mother ordered but Yoo Jung didn’t move.

                “No!” Yoo Jung answered, wearing a face that was full of determination.

So Hyun started to gain consciousness. She could hear loud noises and shouting that made her open her eyes completely. She tried to move and Joo Hyuk finally noticed her and he immediately put her down on the ground.

                “So Hyun-ah!” Joo Hyuk exclaimed and both Sung Jae and Yoo Jung turned to see her.

                “Wha.. What’s going on? Where am I?” So Hyun asked groggily.

                “Sohyunie!” This time, Sung Jae ran to So Hyun’s side. “Are you okay?” He asked.

                “Yook Sung Jae?” So Hyun looked confuse seeing Sung Jae. “Nam Joo Hyuk?” She also noticed Joo Hyuk.

                “Thank God!” Both Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk sighed in relief.

                “Wha.. What are you doing here?” So Hyun struggled and tried to stand up.

                “Easy, there.” Joo Hyuk said and both he and Sung Jae went to help her.

There were all focused on So Hyun and didn’t realized that Jang Yu Mi was able to make a clear shot at So Hyun. Jang Yu Mi was about to pull the trigger when Yoo Jung noticed what she was about to do and she quickly ran to her friends.

                “Watch out!” Yoo Jung shouted and all the three of them turned and saw what was about to happen.

Bang! Jang Yu Mi pulled the trigger. She was still holding her gun towards her target. She looked up and was expecting to see her target lying on the ground but Gu So Hyun was still standing up. Both Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk were standing close to her, blocking her from Jang Yu Mi’s view. Jang Yu Mi was confused. Why was Gu So Hyun still alive?

                “Seo Yoo Jung!” Jang Yu Mi heard someone shout.

Jang Yu Mi saw So Hyun ran towards a body lying on the ground. She was horrified after realizing that her daughter was the one lying on the ground. Her hands started shaking but she never let the gun fall from her hands.

                “Yoo Jung-ah! Seo Yoo Jung!” So Hyun laid Yoo Jung’s head on her lap and shook her desperately to wake up.

So Hyun was holding Yoo Jung in her arms. Both Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk were dumbfounded and shocked that they didn’t able to move from where they were standing. So Hyun tried to shake Yoo Jung again but she saw blood in her hands. So Hyun finally noticed that Yoo Jung’s left shoulder was bleeding.

                “Yoo Jung-ah!” This time, Yoo Jung’s mother ran towards her daughter.

After seeing the blood on So Hyun’s hands, Jang Yu Mi quickly realized that it was her daughter’s blood. She ran towards her daughter, still holding the gun. Jang Yu Mi pushed So Hyun away from her daughter and dropped the gun on the side. So Hyun was still in shock after seeing the blood and didn’t even noticed that she was being shoved aside by Yoo Jung’s mother. Sung Jae automatically caught So Hyun in his arms, saving her from the impact.

                “Sohyunie, you okay?” Sung Jae asked, just after he caught her.

                “Yoo Jung.. She..” So Hyun was lost for words and her body started to shake terribly.

So Hyun was still staring towards Yoo Jung’s direction and Sung Jae followed her gaze. Joo Hyuk was still in shock and never left his post while looking at Yoo Jung’s direction too. They all looked horrified.

                “Yoo Jung-ah! Mommy’s here. Please, wake up.” Jang Yu Mi cried while caressing her daughter’s face.

Just then, Gu Jun Pyo and his F4 friends came jumping in from the sealed gate. They were followed by Woo Bin’s mafia men and started to surround everyone. So Hyun immediately spotted her father and ran towards him.

                “Dad!” So Hyun broke free from Sung Jae’s embrace and ran towards Gu Jun Pyo.

Gu Jun Pyo also ran to meet with his daughter. He was finally able to embrace her daughter but he heard another gunshot and the next thing he knew, So Hyun suddenly went limp into his arms.

                “So Hyun-ah!” Jun Pyo shouted, hugging his daughter desperately.

Jun Pyo’s eyes caught Jang Yu Mi with her hands holding the gun and pointing at their direction. After she fired her gun, he saw Woo Bin kicking the gun away from Jang Yu Mi’s hold and she was immediately apprehended by Woo Bin’s men.

                “No, no, no. So Hyun dear, open your eyes. Please!” Jun Pyo’s tears started to fall.

Both Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk had their eyes open wide in shock seeing So Hyun being shot. Sung Jae was on his knees and couldn’t take his eyes off of So Hyun while Joo Hyuk was having trouble in standing because of his trembling knees. Ji Hoo immediately ran towards Jun Pyo and checked So Hyun’s pulse while Woo Bin was already carrying the unconscious body of Yoo Jung in his arms.

                “Jun Pyo-ah, we have to go now. We have to bring So Hyun in the hospital.” Ji Hoo said.

                “Ji Hoo’s right. This young lady is also hurt.” Woo Bin added, gesturing towards Yoo Jung.

                “The boys are needed to be brought at the hospital too.” Yi Jung continued, looking at both Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk. “They might be hurt too.” He finished.

Jun Pyo immediately carried his daughter and they all went directly to the hospital. Both Yoo Jung and So Hyun were sent to the OR (Operating Room) while Sung Jae and Joo Hyuk were being examined at the ER (Emergency Room).

                “Sung Jae-ah!” Jun Hue came inside the ER together with Bi.

                “How are you feeling?” Bi asked.

                “I’m fine. What about Sohyunie?” Sung Jae asked back quickly.

Bi and Jun Hue couldn’t look at him in the eyes and Joo Hyuk was also listening intently from the other side when Hyun Hyeong and Chan Woo suddenly came barging in behind the curtain.

                “Joo Hyuk-ah!” Chan Woo called and all of them turned, interrupting Sung Jae’s question.

                “You okay?” Hyun Hyeong asked. “We came as soon as we heard about you from Yoon Sung Kyoung.” Hyun Hyeong added and Bi thr

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982 #5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982 #6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982 #7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982 #8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982 #9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.
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