Right Feelings for the Wrong Person

Boys Over Flower 2
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“Joo Hyuk-ah! Over there! I want to ride that one.” Sae Ron exclaimed, gesturing to the roller coaster ride.

                “Are you serious? Are you not scared of those?” Joo Hyuk asked.

                “Of course I’m scared but as long as you’re with me, I’ll be okay.” Sae Ron answered, blushing.

                “Geez, you really know what to say. Fine. Let’s ride that one then.” Joo Hyuk declared.

And so, both Sae Ron and Joo Hyuk went to ride the roller coaster. After riding it, they continued on roaming around the amusement park. They were enjoying each other’s company until it became dark and they decided to ride the cable car for their last stop.

Inside the cable car:

                “Woah! What a nice view especially during this time of the day. What do you think Joo Hyuk-ah?” Sae Ron asked, glancing at Joo Hyuk.

                “You’re right.” Joo Hyuk simply answered and paused. “But I still can’t believe that you actually invited me to come here with you. What’s the reason anyway?” Joo Hyuk asked, glancing back to see her reaction.

Sae Ron became silent. She couldn’t tell him the real reason. She was afraid that if Joo Hyuk will know about Yoo Jung’s idea of her inviting him to the amusement park, he might get disappointed.

                “Well, that’s because it’s been a while since we got out so I thought I’d invite you to have some fun. Why? You don’t think that it was fun?” Sae Ron became alarmed thinking about him not having fun with her.

                “Ofcourse not! I was having a blast, really.” Joo Hyuk recovered. “It’s just so unusual, that’s all. But I didn’t say that it’s a bad thing.” Joo Hyuk added.

                “Is that for real? I mean, it’s not because you’re not enjoying my company and thinking about some other girl, right?” Sae Ron asked, staring straight at Joo Hyuk.

                “What? What do you mean..” Joo Hyuk was about to ask further when the cable car suddenly stopped, making everyone inside flinch and Sae Ron almost fell but Joo Hyuk caught her.

                “What the.. What happened?” Sae Ron asked and panic could be heard from her voice.

                “Are you alright?” Joo Hyuk asked. “The cable car stopped. Must be a blackout seeing that the lights are out.” Joo Hyuk declared, still holding onto Sae Ron and he clearly could feel her trembling.

                “I’m scared.” Sae Ron whispered that only Joo Hyuk could hear.

                “Don’t be. I’m right here.” Joo Hyuk assured.

                “It’s not what you think..” Sae Ron intervened. “I’m scared of losing you to her.” She continued.

                “What.. What are you talking about Sae Ron-ah?” Joo Hyuk asked, clearly confused by her words.

                “I like you, Nam Joo Hyuk.” Sae Ron confessed making Joo Hyuk freeze. “I’m afraid that you might like that Gu So Hyun. I mean, I can tell that you’re starting to like her and she clearly likes you too! I’m not even your girlfriend so I couldn’t tell her to stay away from you.” Sae Ron blurted out.

                “Park Sae Ron. What the hell are you blabbering about? I don’t like So Hyun like that.” Joo Hyuk stated but then he paused and contemplated about what he just said. “I like Gu So Hyun? That’s absurd. I mean, I’ve always liked Sae Ron. Sae Ron’s just don’t know what she’s saying.. Right?” Joo Hyuk thought. “So Hyun’s just a friend. And a GOOD one for that matter so you shouldn’t say something like that.” Joo Hyuk assured.

                “Don’t give me that! A friend? Well, does she know that?” Sae Ron became hysterical.

Joo Hyuk didn’t know what to do. He was surprised by Sae Ron’s sudden love confession. He had waited for this moment, a moment where they could finally reveal their feelings for each other but something had changed somehow. Joo Hyuk couldn’t tell what it was yet, but seeing Sae Ron’s hysterical outburst, he decided to do something about it.

                “Sae Ron-ah, you shouldn’t feel that way. You knew. You already knew that I’ve liked you ever since our 1st year at middle school, right?” Joo Hyuk countered and this time, Sae Ron looked up at his face.

                “What about now?” Sae Ron asked expectantly.

                “I..” He paused. “I.. I still do.” Joo Hyuk declared but his expression was unreadable. “Should have I said that? Did I do the right thing just now?” Jo Hyuk still wasn’t sure about his feelings, but he said it anyway for Sae Ron’s sake.

                “You do?” Sae Ron lit up after hearing his confession to her. “If you really do, then you have to stay away from Gu So Hyun from now on. For me.” Sae Ron demanded.

                “What? I already told you that we’re just friends. What else do I have to do to make you believe me?” Joo Hyuk started to get tired of the conversation and started to look away.

                “Just until her feelings for you go away.” Sae Ron interrupted, searching for his eyes.

                “How can you even tell that she have feelings for me? I mean, it’s just been weeks since we knew each other!” Joo Hyuk exclaimed and Sae Ron just stared at him seriously.

Joo Hyuk and Sae Ron continued on arguing that they didn’t even notice that some of the passengers in the cable car with them were already staring at them. When they finally noticed, Joo Hyuk gave up on arguing with Sae Ron quickly.

                “Fine.” Joo Hyuk finally agreed. “I’ll stay away from her. Just until those absurd thoughts of yours subside.” Joo Hyuk concluded. “Right. I should calm Sae Ron’s feelings and thoughts for now. She comes first. After all, she’s the one that you like, Nam Joo Hyuk.” He told himself as if he’s trying to convinced himself.

Then the lights suddenly went on and the cable car moved again.

At the Girls’ Dormitory:

Tok! Tok! Tok!

Sung Kyoung was brushing her teeth when she heard a knock on the door. She quickly ran towards it and didn’t even bother to rinse to open it. When she opened the door, she saw So Hyun looking frantic.

                “What’s up?” Sung Kyoung words became muffled because of the bubbles coming from brushing her teeth.

                “It’s Hayi.” So Hyun stated.

After hearing Hayi’s name, Sung Kyoung immediately ran outside to So Hyun and Hayi’s room and So Hyun was following behind her. When they entered the room, they saw Hayi just sitting still on the sofa and staring into nothingness. They both went closer to her and tried to catch her attention but they still got nothing from her.

                “What’s wrong with her?” Sung Kyoung demanded and some of the bubbles got spit out from .

                “Yah, Yoon Sung Kyoung! Can’t you rinse your mouth first? That’s so disgusting.” So Hyun scolded.

                “Aisshh! It’s because you got me worried over Hayi!” Sung Kyoung countered and more bubbles came out.

Sung Kyoung went to rinse while So Hyun continued on catching Hayi’s attention by trying to make a conversation with her. But all she could get were answers she couldn’t understand.

                “That’s it. It’s a sign. She’s getting dumber.” Sung Kyoung exclaimed, returning from rinsing .

                “Oh, shut up.” So Hyun warned and Sung Kyoung just smiled impishly. “I wonder what happened to her. She really LIKEs the people to worry about her, seriously.” So Hyun commented.

                “LIKE?” Hayi suddenly jolted after hearing a specific word, making her friends flinch.

                “You like Hayi, right?” Hayi suddenly remembered Suhyun asking Bobby the question.

                “Of course NOT!” And this time, Hayi remembered Bobby answering Suhyun’s question.

                “Hayi-ah, are you okay? You’re not sick are you? God, this sickness mania sure HATEs us.” So Hyun stated.

                “HATE?” Hayi blurted out of nowh

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Rainysuzyyeh #1
Chapter 1: Seems fun, though from what i read about otgers comment made me kind of worried about how you will potray suhyun character, since i camw here only for suhyun, lol
BabyHyun96 #2
Seems like a good fic. Will try to read it when I have the time :D
pinkypn #3
Chapter 40: I wanted to know who each girls will end up dating. I'm glad all their family problems worked out. At least I know Bobby and hayi ended up together. Are you going to write an epilogue or a sequel?
pinkypn #4
Chapter 32: I'm tried of seeing the girls getting bullied and nothing is being done. How can those people keep getting away with it, where are the teachers when the girls are getting bullied. I'm starting to get annoyed that everyone keeps calling hayi dumb even her family, they are always calling her dumb.
Rubybeauty1982
#5
Chapter 32: My comment wouldn't fit into one, so I had to cut them by sections author. This is what I get for writing more than 1000 words. Shame on me...lol
Rubybeauty1982
#6
Chapter 32: Oh my freaking cheeseballs! I love you so much author! You really made my day when you made that last chapter about Bobby and Hayi. I was literally screaming like a middle school girl. There was so much Bobhi feels there…ah!!!!!

I was kind of mad that Bobby’s teacher would not let his students choose different partners for their next assignment. I was hoping Bobby and Hayi would pair up and paint a portrait together. Oh well.

Chanwoo actually man up and confessed his feelings to Hayi! Wow! I can’t believe he confess to her! However, I was very happy that he apologized to her about the cafeteria incident. I mean, Hayi’s a very forgiving person and holds no grudges. It pissed me off that he still sided with his close friend Yoo Jung. I wish Bobby would have slap her across the face for hurting Hayi. Even though Chanwoo is the nicest guy out of their little circle of friends, I can’t help but pity him. The girl that he likes is interested in someone else. I’m glad he has no regrets confessing his love to her.
Rubybeauty1982
#7
Chapter 32: Suhyun. Sigh, what should I say about her? I’m still pissed at her for treating Hayi badly. I know she likes Bobby, but I hope she realizes that Bobby doesn’t like her in that kind of way. She really needs to move on. I think she would be a great fit for Junhoe. He’s just as annoying as she is and they make a perfect match. Both of them are very selfish and they only care about themselves. I do hope you write a flash back on what happened between Bobby and her conversation in the Art room. I really want to know how Bobby rejected her. I hope he was harsh with her too. That is something I’m anticipating to read!

I’m glad Bobby clarified to Hayi that he “liked her” not as a friend, but as a woman. I know she’s a little slow, but I’m glad she knows that he is interested in her. I was very MAD that they didn’t kiss author. You should have made them kiss! Since you’re editing this story, can you please make Bobby kiss Hayi in front of their friends? Pretty please? Especially in front of Chanwoo too!

I want to read from Hayi’s point of view too. I really want to know what she thinks of Bobby and how she will express her feelings to him. It would be awesome if she made the first move, like kissing him on the cheek, or holding his hand out in public, or doing lots of skin ship with him. They’re in High School, so it doesn’t hurt to show lots of affection to each other since they like each other.

Like I said to you in my last comment author, I’m only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad for saying this, but I really don’t care about the other characters (even though they’re the 3rd generation of F4). However, I do like Suhyun and Junhoe’s bickering. They would be my second pair that I would read from this story. It’s refreshing and funny at the same time. If you happen to make Bobby and Hayi official in the next chapter, these two can learn a thing or two from the romantic couple. It wouldn’t be such a bad idea.
Rubybeauty1982
#8
Chapter 32: I hope you’ll write more fluffy (as in cute) interactions on Bobby and Hayi. Please have them go on a date or a school field trip together. I want them to spend as much time as they can together. More dates means more romantic feelings and kisses! , who wouldn’t want to kiss a hot hunk like Bobby? I know if he was my man, I probably wouldn’t let him out of the house! Lol. Although I feel Bobby does not have any experience, he should ask his immature friends for some help. Can you imagine them giving Bobby some romantic tips? Especially Junhoe and B.I? God, I think they would be the worst friends to ask for romantic advice. No offense.

It would be even better if Hayi and Bobby go on a double date with Suhyun and Junhoe! That would be something very entertaining and funny to read. Their double date is either going to be a fun experience or a nightmare. Knowing how loud and stupid Suhyun and Junhoe are, they would probably ruin the date (which is fine by me) because that means Bobby will have to drag Hayi somewhere alone so they can have their “me time” together.

I really want to read more about Bobby’s jealousy towards Chanwoo. I’m still disappointed that these two did not fight in the cafeteria. You need more action in this story author! I know Hayi would side with Bobby no matter what. If there is going to be more action scenes, please write a action scene with Bobby and Chanwoo. I wouldn’t mind seeing Hayi in the background cheering for her man. Lol.

I’m so sorry author if I keep blabbering about Bobby and Hayi. I guess you can tell I’m a huge Bobhi shipper. Well, I lied. I’m more of a Hanhi (B.I) shipper than Bobhi. However, the fact that you have B.I paired up with someone else in this story, Bobby is fine with me. I know some of your other readers will probably be annoyed with you if I keep asking you to update about only Bobby and Hayi. Please try to add a little bit of them in the next few chapters. I know you’re trying to even out all the characters in here, and if you’re editing, can I request you to add another chapter about Bobby and Hayi? I know I’m asking for too much, but if you do take my request, I promise I’ll leave you another long comment. This is how much I like your story (well, only Bobby and Hayi). Lol.

Please update more about Bobby and Hayi author. Until then, I will see you in the next chapter. I hope my comment here will motivate you to write more about Bobby and Hayi. Or perhaps, maybe you can write a story about them. I know I’ll subscribe and upvote your story for sure! Oh, and of course leave a nice long comment too. :D Fighting author!!!
Rubybeauty1982
#9
Chapter 27: God damn! That fighting scene was awesome! Kind of funny if you ask me. I'm going to be totally honest with you author. I'm only here to read about Bobby and Hayi. I was VERY disappointed that there was not enough Bobhi interactions in the last couple of chapters (well besides the part where Bobby confessed to Hayi that he liked her), but it was still not long enough.

Please make a full chapter just about Bobby and Hayi. I would be the happiest girl alive. And, I promise to leave you a long comment too. I don't want to say Hayi is dumb, but she is a little slow. I think she mistaken Bobby's confession as a "I don't hate you, but I like you as a friend" thing. Bobby needs to make it clear to Hayi that he likes her more than a friend. , make him kiss her on the lips so she would know that he likes her as a woman! Please do that! Especially in front of Suhyun! Honestly, I don't like her at all. The way how she treats Hayi makes me want to slap her 100 times.

I get pissed off when her stupid F4 friends call her dumb. Hayi should show her useless friends that she's not as dumb as what they think. Bobby will be by her side no matter what. He seems to be a very good influence on her and he could probably educate her well.

I loved the part where he was so concerned about Hayi that he was going to confront Yoo Jung. It's a shame that Chanwoo stopped Bobby. I was hoping Bobby would throw his fist at Chanwoo too. Too bad Hayi and Suhyun stopped him. That would have been epic to read! Can you imagine Hayi trying to pull Bobby off of Chanwoo? I'm sure Hayi would have take a punch for Bobby too. Ah, true love!

Please please please write more about Bobby and Hayi. I shall patiently wait for your next update on Bobby and Hayi. I feel bad that everyone in their group is suspended for a week. Well, I do hope that during their week off school, Bobby and Hayi will hook up, share some sweet kisses, and go on lots of dates! Chanwoo will be upset, but oh well. That is life.

I really don't mind reading about June and Suhyun. I love the way how they bicker with each other, which makes me wonder if those two are going to hook up in the end? I hope so author. That way she'll leave Hayi and Bobby alone. Sigh, I really do want to slap her. Lol. Please update soon author and I promise to leave you at least over a 1000 words when I comment. But please write a full chapter about Bobby and Hayi!
pinkypn #10
Chapter 25: All I know is 3rd generation f4 needs to put yoojung and searon along with their little helpers in their place like how their parents did. Their parents was quick to put people back in their place.