A Story You Guys Might Like If You're Reading This One

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This is still my main fic, but I decided to start a different,  short one because inspiration struck me.

Basically the premise of the fic is that in the future, people have developed this implant that people can put in their brains that lets them see whatever they want, whether it's reality or not. The BTS boys are using this as a coping mechanism, and I'm basically creating a different interpretation of the Most Beautiful Moment In Life storyline.

 

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/1139984/reality-angst-jimin-bts-futureau-jungkook-taehyung-ineeduau

 

Read if you're interested - each chapter is going to be extremely short, and there aren't going to be many chapters.

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ElectricLollipop
I wrote like a thousand words of the next chapter but it didn't save and now I'm frustrated and sad. TT_TT

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ashkhen #1
Chapter 40: I'm one of the old subscribers that read it in the beginning. I respect your choices but I really want to read more of this story. I still want to know the fallout between Tae and his brothers. Why his parents are like that and what went wrong.
iranian_kpoper
#2
I wish you could continue writing this story cause although its depressed and everything, it has such a deep thoghtful cocept , and is written to touch the depth of the readers heart so I really enjoy reading it no matter how sad it was. So I really like to read more of it and get to know what happens for the characters.
ashkhen #3
Chapter 37: We won't pressure you to update and everyone needs time to heal from Jonghyun's death. It brought me tears, sadness, heartbroken and shocked. He will be greatly missed and respected.
ashkhen #4
Chapter 36: Ohhhhh my, that's kinda scary but I wonder what the next chapter is mostly about since its on Yoonseok
ashkhen #5
Chapter 35: Everything in this chapter is really sad and good....Hoseok shouldn't have bottled up his feelings to himself and should've told Junhong from the start....the first battle Hoseok had with Junhong was really great because they both know each other and had fun with it......Hoseok is great friends with Junhong and hope it lasts long......Hoseok I'm loving how shocked your friends were at the academy and Yunho being shocked, impressed and can't deal with you at times lol.....Junhong now knows what is up with Hoseok and is being there with him along the way....they all reunited again and I love it
AllisonWest #6
Chapter 34: AS I SAID, SOONER OR LATER! I guess this one turned out to be later ^^" I AM SO FBDNSJSHSJS I CAAAANNN'TTT RIGHT NOW WITH MY FEEELS OMGFBDSBBD. I was trying really hard not to cry on several parts of the story so congrats to you for that, but in the end I managed not to (so congrats to me heh). It still hit me hard and I kinda wish I had been more prepared though, lol. I really absolutely loved this chapter so much and when I saw how long it was I was like "oh, ! This is good." You really surpassed my expectations, this was so ing good *bows down* I'm sorry, I can't say it enough. You really hurt my hearteu, like, right in the Hobi spot *dies*. I'm so glad you're back and I can't wait for the next update~ Keep up the great writing! *blows kiss like Jin*
speedy-spee #7
Chapter 34: Welcome back ♡•♡
ashkhen #8
Chapter 34: Chapter 34: OMG HOSEOK'S STORY IS REALLY ASAD AND GLAD HE GETS ALONG WITH THE OTHER KIDS AT THE ORPHANAGE. HE WILL GET THROUGH IT AND MAKE AWESOME FRIENDS.
ParkEunRi
#9
Chapter 6: Omg just reading the beginning again... it h ur ts so much you h ur t me so much... hoseok when he was drinking with yoongi, jin and namjoon, making the joke "my parents should picke me up and take me home" ARRGHHHHH IT KILLED MEEEEEE oh my ghaaaaaddddddffff arghhhsss
ParkEunRi
#10
Chapter 33: Part 2
Ok and I dunno whether I commented in the past.. but... I love the way u described their pasts, it's so sad and so happy and so catching, really aarrghhhssss it fits so perfect with what kind of problems amd characteristics they developed and I love how taehyung was able to open up to hoseok und yoongi and accepts that hoseok still meeds time and I love the role that yoongi and hoseok play for each other and the role yoongi has between taehyung and hoseok, like he knows what they told each other and what not, and tells and comments things and behaviours of hoseok and I love how that works without pissing the other off, I guess their friendship and relationship and live for each other just works out and woa I really really like that <3

And hoseoks past ... ugh... uuuugggggfgghhhhhhhh why have you to describe how damn happy they have been, hoseok and his sister, how they grew to be friends too and how they hrlped each other, were there and happy and then... ufghh.. whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy aaarrrghhhhh and how hoseok said: my family is dead
I really could understand that taehyung was scared of him the first time,, I would have been too.. uugghh so sad I would just want to pull him close and never let him go again...

I'm really really really looking forward to the next chapters, but if course don't feel pressured just keep in mi.d that I LOVE THIS STORY no matter what and now I'm cursed to think about what will and had happen in this story T______T