Hey all

This is my first review shop so I will be relatively new at it.

If you want me to review yours then please post your request in a message on my wall or a comment in this format:

Fanfic title:
Fanfic link:
A brief synopsis (so I know what I'm reading:
Any other fine details:

I do write as well so if I haven't reviewed yours within two months then feel free to bug me about it or cancel.

There are just these rules I would like you to follow:

1. I will read H rated stuff except for . and Yuri I will do.

2. I review kpop, jpop, cpop and actors and anime fics.

3. Make sure it is easy for me to read. Big paragraphs and random colours can be off putting to the eye but I will make exceptions.

4. I will review unfinished and one-shots.

5. Give me warning when you want to cancel. An hour before is not really considerate >_<

6. I will be honest with you. I am still learning when it comes to spelling and grammar but I will do my best and I hope this will help with my future writing as well.

7. When I've completed a review it will change from the blue area to the red so if you aren't subscribed then check this page as it will tell you.

8. I don't mind if you request a review from another place as well as mine. I am new at this so it would help to see what others would pick up on that I don't. Just let me know where please :)

9. Let me know whether you would like the review in the old or the new format.

Happy requesting!

 New Format

Fanfiction Link:

Title: /5

• Does it relate to the plot? 1 mark
• Is it a good length so between one word to one short sentence? 1 mark
• Are there any errors in capitalisation 1/2 mark
• Are punctuation marks used correctly? 1/2 mark
• Is the grammar and spelling correct? 1 mark
   

Forewords: /5

• Did it get my attention?  2 marks
• Was the length feasible (between two sentences to two paragraphs)? 1 mark
• Were the colours and the style/size of the font easy to read? 1 mark
• Did it tease the readers or tell them what was going to happen? 1 mark

Plot: /10

• Did the story start of on a weak or strong foot? 2 marks
• Were there any twists or turns? 2 marks
• Was the plot mostly unpredictable? 2 marks
• Did the characters fit in with the plot? 2 marks
• Did the settings and the themes tie in with the story? 2 marks

Flow: /10

• Was the pacing steady enough to keep it going or did it lag or speed up in sections? 3 marks
• Did the story too early or drag out too much? 3 marks
• Did each chapter have a good length or was it too short/long? 3 marks
• Did the plot get resolved or left hanging? If it was left hanging is there a sequel 1 mark
   

Spelling/Grammar/Vocabulary: /10

• Correct spelling 1 mark
• Grammar 2 marks
• Vocabulary 2 marks
• Could I get a basic idea of what was written? 2 marks
• Correct use of tense 1 mark
• Sentence structure correct (may have to remove) 1 mark
• Suitable punctuation and capitalisation 1 mark

Characterization: /10

Three  characters will be assessed and the points given accordingly

For the mains

• Could one relate to them? 1 mark for each main
• Did they have their strengths and weaknesses? 1 mark for each main
• Was one drawn to liking them or loathing them appropriateley? 1 mark for each main
• Did their behaviour align with their character? 1 mark for each main

For secondary characters

• Did they support any of the main characters? 1 mark
• Did they have suitable mention to not completely blend in to the background? 1 mark

If there's only one main then the characters will be assessed differently and the score having to equal about or less than 10.

Originality: /10

• Were there too many cliches? 5 marks
• Did the story stand by itself? 5 marks

Overall enjoyment: /10

• Is it a story I could read again? 5 marks
• Could I relate to the characters? 2 marks
• Was the length suitable for me? (between 20 to 60 70 chapters) 2 marks
• Did I feel any emotional pull from the story? 1 mark

Overall Score: /70

Plus other comments

Some useful places:

Grammar Tipsy by MusicChibi

Why People Hate Your Story by DeviLaugh

What Not to Write (fanfiction tips) by jwhong005

Writing: Thoughts and Tips by ErisChaotica