Chapter 23

Journal Of Ardency
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"Aaah this ", Byunghun threw his iPad away.
Daniel glare at him while his fingers were still busy pressing all the keys on his laptop; "Mwo yaaa~! hyung, you should help me, heol, look at the other players they don't have any energy left... Ayyy why should Chanhee-hyung joined us really, he's no use!", Daniel clicked his tongue.
"Ng, I'm tired", Byunghun dropped himself back to the bed.
"Aigooo~ what to do with this. Jonghyun-ah, play Byunghun-hyung's character~!", Daniel took a glance at Jonghyun that busy with his phone on the other side of the bed.
"I hate games", he replied short as he turned his chair away.

"Tsk.. I'm dying heeere, yaaah, hyuuung", Daniel shook his helpless hyung with his left hand while his right hand still passionately controlled the game.
"Let me try", Soojoo who already finished with her orange juice took the iPad and sat beside Daniel.
"You know how to play it?", asked Daniel.
"Nope. But it's easy I guess... ah, so you used A and L to attack", she said, randomly pressing the keypad.
"Yeah! yeah, keep doing it, you're doing good", Daniel chuckled.

Byunghun just looked at them who were immersed into the game. Then after couple minutes a smile arose from Daniel's unwashed face. "YEAAAAH", he pumped his fists to the air and did a high five with Soojoo. He still wore the same clothes as yesterday and his forehead was shone by the morning sun since he tied his bangs up. Apple hair, they said. Daniel was playing the same game since last week as he was done with all mid-semester tests.

"You finally win?", Byunghun straightened his position, tried to be not too excited.
"Yeah. Ah... Soojoo-ya, I don't know you have talent in this game, you should make your account and team up more with me", Daniel rounded his arm on Soojoo.
"It's just a coincidence~!", Byunghun exclaimed.
Soojoo chuckled at how obvious he was.
"You , hyung", Daniel gave him a straight face as a tease.
"I-it's because I'm not fit now.. look, my fingers are shivering", Byunghun revealed his hands to Daniel.
Daniel took and observed them carefully, he then sighed and threw them off. Byunghun opened his mouth in disbelieve.

"Heol~! why did you~", Byunghun squealed.
"They didn't shiver before", said Daniel, still wore the poker face.
"Daniel, stop it", Soojoo hit Daniel's head.
"Ouch... what are you doing?!", Daniel exclaimed.
"Are you still cold, oppa?", Soojoo sat on Byunghun's bed and looked at him affectionately.
Byunghun acted cute and nodded; "Nielie is so cruel", he said with aegyo.
"Aaaaaa what's that what's that... hyung, that's so gross", Daniel clenched his teeth, holding between laughter and real disgust. Byunghun looked at his dongsaeng and finally bursted into laugh.
"Why, though?? you said you like girls who do a lot of aegyo?", Byunghun asked.

"Eh? really?", Soojoo chuckled in disbelieve, since she rarely does aegyo.
"Tsk, it's just for those silly girls... are you jealous, hyung? you're the cutest when you didn't try to be", Daniel ruffled Byunghun's hair.
Soojoo smiled and turned to Jonghyun; "Jonghyun-ah, I think we're just disturbed them", she said jokingly as Jonghyun turned his chair facing them and giggled.

"No no no... I need you all guys here", Byunghun raised his hands in panic.
"Ah, yes, you specially called us here today. What was it?", Jonghyun finally put away his mobile and paid attention to Byunghun.
"Um... it's... Jonghyun-ah, d-do you still remember our conversation in the car before?", Byunghun asked Jonghyun full with excitement.
"Oh? which one is that hyung... we talked about a lot of things...", Jonghyun chuckled.
"That one.. when you said you want to make a movie", Byunghun lowered his volume.
"Me being a director?", asked Jonghyun.
"Un!", Byunghun nodded.

"I have this... one... story... if we could make it somehow", said Byunghun, averted his eyes between the three of them.
"What is it... oppa, are you asking us to... play as actors, then?", Soojoo pointed her finger to herself and Daniel.
"Hyung, you never tell me anything about it", Daniel giggled.
"It's..., look at this!", Byunghun took his iPad and show them one movie competition brochure.
"Rotten Berries Movie Competition... submit your film before December 13th...", the three of them read it faithfully.
"See... see... they opened the short film competition and the winner's film will win a spot in Sundance!", Byunghun scrolled the brochure.
"SUNDANCE?! whoa, okay, I'm in", said Soojoo without hesitation.
"Wait, hyung, you trust me to direct this, don't you?", Jonghyun moved closer to Byunghun.
"Yes, don't you want to make movie? this is your chance, OUR CHANCE. Yah, Soojoo, Niel, isn't this a great opportunity for us, we were those kids in our little movie club back then, let's make something big this time", said Byunghun passionately.
"That sounds cool, Jonghyun-ah, I remember you made that awesome clip with your friends last semester", said Daniel.

"Hmm... I still have friends to borrow things from... my editing skills are improving too these days~", Jonghyun jokingly bragged.

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Angel_Ahn
#1
I re-read this again T_T
This is my first ever Teen Top fanfic .. and you made me fall for NielJoe .. thank you author nim ^^
decemberdaisy
#2
Chapter 33: Author-nim

I dropped by here again just want to say that I still love this story so much. Like muuuuuuucchhhhh. This story is indeed beautiful and heart clenching.

Last time I read this fic, it was one year ago and I re-read this fic again. This story still makes me want to cry so much. It still makes my heart ache on the last chapter.

And I still like Dani and Honey's story even now. That fairytale is really good one. You should make it as published book I think. Hehehe.


Anyway, thank you for writing this beautiful story. I will always like to read this story again and again. You are a good writer. Really.
SungrinBF
#3
Chapter 33: Gosh...I can't ㅠㅠ I finished this story while reading it on a rainy day and a sad piano instrumental ...too much tears on my pillowcase ㅠㅠ Especially the end part where he died....My family looked at me as if I was insane O.o I love this story, it is so realistic! (Lol, I even thought that Honey's disease is a real disease but when you said on Chapter 21 that it is'nt, I was mindblown) You're creativity is just...in the maximum level! To be honest, I find this story better than those cliche ones on bookstores kekeke~
Yunkaisoo #4
Chapter 33: Uwahhh...... T_T
Really really good story...
I'm crying so hard. I was having a hard time sobbing,,
I want to let out my voice but i don't want my sister call me crazy..
The end was so sad..
I don't know what to say anymore...
Love this story But not the die part.. :D
panda203 #5
Chapter 33: This was soo sad ㅠ.ㅠ
How can you write something as amazing and beautiful as this? *~*
I cried so hard when I read the last chapter cuz I really thought that byunghun would survive and finally go to the beach with niel..
But I was deeply touched about all the things that happened to those two ^~^
I hope I can read other fanfics of yours authornim cuz you're really good at writing
Thank you so much for this story~
Hwaiting♡ love you♡♡♡
Sugar11 #6
Chapter 33: All 

Chapter 32: I didnt even notice that I cried so hard once finished ur story, it's beyond awesome, it's beautiful. Thanks for such an incredible story
SaraYun #7
Nice . . !
19twentyone
#8
Chapter 32: OTL, I kind of expected byungie to die because I "accidentally" read one of the comments but I cried so much TT.TT
I just found out about the story and read it in just hours.
I don't know what to do with my NielJoe feels anymore ~
Great ending author nim :)
chunjixbyungie
#9
I finished this yesterday and i was stunned..i guess no matter what , i wanted to believe byunghun would make it alive somehow.
I was having a hard time sobbing until midnight xD.
But i still have a question
How come..he was in coma when niel was in paris but was there with niel as well ..it cant be a dream bec the violin is a proof..besides he told niel that 7th bday thing .
Ugh anyways i gotta admire your creativity ..how u planned it ALL beforehand !!!
It was perfect, so detailed n realistic.Niel's last words eased me a bit.
Are u punishing for those five years..
eE will see ..i have all of my life to love u and when we meet im gonna say i won !!!
chunjixbyungie
#10
Chapter 30: I Hope am not bothering u xD.
But srsly !!!! This ch is beautful in everyway.
Niel 's thoughts and how he missed byunghun was too sweet.
How he wanted to call him again.
How he wished he could ruffle his hair .
The wedding part when Noel teared up with people .