Chapter 9

Journal Of Ardency
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"I can show you the woooorld... shining shimmering spleeendiiid", Daniel danced around while drying his hair with a towel. It has finally been two weeks they moved in together. Now they're totally comfortable with each other.
"What are you doing, really? what's with your current addiction to Disney songs?", Byunghun chuckled as he watched his dongsaeng from their comfy couch in the living room.
"Because... I took musical study this last semester", said Daniel as he put a glass of milk in front of Byunghun and sat beside him.
"Really?", Byunghun's eyes widened.
"Yeah! A whole new wooooorld...", Daniel sang passionately.
"A dazzling place I never kneeew", Byunghun continued just to make them two burst into laugh.

"Yah, hyung, you really have no sense for pitch", Niel laughed hard while holding his tummy.
"Heol. That's why I'm a writer, not a singer~!", Byunghun giggled.
"Ah! anyway, I also decided to take another class this semester...", Niel took his laptop from the bookshelf beside them.
"Jajjaaang... scriptwriting~!", Daniel excitedly show an empty Word document.
"What?", Byunghun chuckled as he saw nothing in it.
"Tsk. I should make a short story for my first assignment... how should I do this", Daniel whined.
"You should find an idea first", said Byunghun.
"Of course! but I'm so lack of it", said Daniel.
"You can't be lack of ideas, you just second guess every each of them", Byunghun smiled.

Daniel took a glance on his hyung; "Hehe... you're right. Hmmm.....", Daniel looked up to the ceiling to find an inspiration, but nothing came.
"Aish. It's hard. Hyung, how could you be a writer...?", Daniel rested his head on the couch.
"To be honest, I don't have the confidence at first. Well, actually I quite didn't know what I want to be once I graduated from high school", Byunghun smiled.
"Eh?? really? then how could you decide that you want to be a writer?", Daniel asked curiously.
"Back in 12th grade I also had my scriptwriting assignment for Literature subject... my teacher hated my writings, I was quite down that time, since I really grew fond of it as I wrote it little by little. And I love movie, right... how could I do it wrong, I thought. Then, you saw it accidentally in our movie club...", Byunghun tilted his head, hoped Daniel would remember something.
"Ah. I know I know. That script was about an accidental meeting between two strangers. I said it was amazing, right?", said Daniel.

"No, you didn't say that~!. You said 'whoa, this story is so you, hyung'. It's not 'whoa it's awesome' not even 'I really like it'. They would sound fake, but instead you sincerely said it was 'so me'. After I had a bad review from my teacher and second guessing myself, to heard you said that to me, I felt like I found myself again...", said Byunghun as he smiled to the ground.
"I don't really remember what I said, but I do remember it was a great story", Daniel giggled.
"Yeah... then I decided to give literature major a try, since it was also not physically demanding. Later I found that your words always coming back to me every time I faced with tough reviews. I thought, even they hated it, I won't forget to stay true to myself... I realized how words could really affect people... no matter how simple and trivial it was... I wanted to affect people too... with all sort of emotions... through my writings", Byunghun continued.

Daniel just stared at his hyung, lost for words.
"You think I'm weird, huh?", Byunghun chuckled.
"No no, hyung... I just... It's funny how words that I didn't quite remember really pushed you that far", said Daniel, sat straightly to won his hyung's eye contact. Byunghun looked down as usual, didn't want to stare at Daniel's pretty eyes for too long.

"Tell me how to affect people through writing too, hyung", said Daniel, back with his laptop.
"Hmmm... for stories, you need to have a very interesting opening lines", said Byunghun.
"Alright... how about... once upon a time", Daniel started to type.
"Yah, that's bit...", Byunghun laughed.
"Once upon a time~! there lived a boy. A very young boy. A kid, he was like 10 or so, I didn't know... He was weak, he had a disease and couldn't stand cold at all. He couldn't do physically demanding activities as well. His name was Heoni", Daniel kept typing.
"Heoni? like, my name? heoni? hunnie? hunny?", Byunghun giggled.
"Aish. Fine. It's HONEY. In English", said Daniel.
"Hahahaha... what's that", Byunghun peeped to Daniel's monitor.

"Then, one day, by the end of summer, he moved out into his big family house in the mountain. Since the air was clearer there, his condition would theoretically improved", Daniel continued his so called story.
"Ah... nice idea. Maybe I should move to the mountain", said Byunghun.
"Of course you have. Honey sleeeept aaaalll day, he was lazy, he never cooked his own meal and washed his own dishes"
Byunghun couldn't take it anymore and he laughed out loud. Daniel just giggled saw his hyung drowned into laughter.
"Honey was sick, really sick. He was too weak to do all those stuffs", Byunghun added.
"Yah! there's nothing hard about washing dishes. It's just one bowl anyway. And a pair of chopstick and a spoon~!", Daniel protested.

"But he was really sick~!", Byunghun half yelled.
"Tsk. Okay. Honey was sooo sick. He had a very rare disease called Chronological Anemia", Daniel typed again.
"It's Cryodyserythropoietic Anemia", Byunghun corrected him.
"Heol. What's that... is that your disease? Honey isn't you, hyung... don't be so self conscious", Daniel scoffed.
"Who then?!", Byunghun chuckled.
"One day.. Honey was lying on h

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Angel_Ahn
#1
I re-read this again T_T
This is my first ever Teen Top fanfic .. and you made me fall for NielJoe .. thank you author nim ^^
decemberdaisy
#2
Chapter 33: Author-nim

I dropped by here again just want to say that I still love this story so much. Like muuuuuuucchhhhh. This story is indeed beautiful and heart clenching.

Last time I read this fic, it was one year ago and I re-read this fic again. This story still makes me want to cry so much. It still makes my heart ache on the last chapter.

And I still like Dani and Honey's story even now. That fairytale is really good one. You should make it as published book I think. Hehehe.


Anyway, thank you for writing this beautiful story. I will always like to read this story again and again. You are a good writer. Really.
SungrinBF
#3
Chapter 33: Gosh...I can't ㅠㅠ I finished this story while reading it on a rainy day and a sad piano instrumental ...too much tears on my pillowcase ㅠㅠ Especially the end part where he died....My family looked at me as if I was insane O.o I love this story, it is so realistic! (Lol, I even thought that Honey's disease is a real disease but when you said on Chapter 21 that it is'nt, I was mindblown) You're creativity is just...in the maximum level! To be honest, I find this story better than those cliche ones on bookstores kekeke~
Yunkaisoo #4
Chapter 33: Uwahhh...... T_T
Really really good story...
I'm crying so hard. I was having a hard time sobbing,,
I want to let out my voice but i don't want my sister call me crazy..
The end was so sad..
I don't know what to say anymore...
Love this story But not the die part.. :D
panda203 #5
Chapter 33: This was soo sad ㅠ.ㅠ
How can you write something as amazing and beautiful as this? *~*
I cried so hard when I read the last chapter cuz I really thought that byunghun would survive and finally go to the beach with niel..
But I was deeply touched about all the things that happened to those two ^~^
I hope I can read other fanfics of yours authornim cuz you're really good at writing
Thank you so much for this story~
Hwaiting♡ love you♡♡♡
Sugar11 #6
Chapter 33: All 

Chapter 32: I didnt even notice that I cried so hard once finished ur story, it's beyond awesome, it's beautiful. Thanks for such an incredible story
SaraYun #7
Nice . . !
19twentyone
#8
Chapter 32: OTL, I kind of expected byungie to die because I "accidentally" read one of the comments but I cried so much TT.TT
I just found out about the story and read it in just hours.
I don't know what to do with my NielJoe feels anymore ~
Great ending author nim :)
chunjixbyungie
#9
I finished this yesterday and i was stunned..i guess no matter what , i wanted to believe byunghun would make it alive somehow.
I was having a hard time sobbing until midnight xD.
But i still have a question
How come..he was in coma when niel was in paris but was there with niel as well ..it cant be a dream bec the violin is a proof..besides he told niel that 7th bday thing .
Ugh anyways i gotta admire your creativity ..how u planned it ALL beforehand !!!
It was perfect, so detailed n realistic.Niel's last words eased me a bit.
Are u punishing for those five years..
eE will see ..i have all of my life to love u and when we meet im gonna say i won !!!
chunjixbyungie
#10
Chapter 30: I Hope am not bothering u xD.
But srsly !!!! This ch is beautful in everyway.
Niel 's thoughts and how he missed byunghun was too sweet.
How he wanted to call him again.
How he wished he could ruffle his hair .
The wedding part when Noel teared up with people .