SoJung POV

Serenity's Guardians

"Yuilie, Yuilie, YuilHan if you don't come out here this instant I'll....."

"Umm SoJung what are you doing?" Asks a voice from behind. I sit up and turn around from the air vent I was just yelling into to find Kris giving me a weird look.

"What's it look like I'm doing?" I snarl 

"Well it looks like your yelling into that air vent" he says slinging a backpack off his shoulder.

"I am yelling into this air vent because YuilHan is in it again and refuses to come out."

"Oh come on SoJung what did you do now?" He asks me

"I didn't do anything to her it was Jihoon" I say "and what are you doing back so early?" It was Kris and Tao's turn to go out hunting. They weren't suppose to be back for at least another 30 minutes or so. I looked around then turned back to Kris. "Where is Tao? is he okay?" 

"Yeah, yeah he's fine him and the twins are gutting and skinning the game." He reassures "so, if YuilHan is in there than where is Jihoon?"

"Up there" I say then turn and point to the beam in the ceiling that Jihoon is on. Right now me and my pack are at one of our safe houses we have a couple all over the world.  The one we're in now is an old school gym in Connecticut.  

"So what happened?" Kris asks

"I'm not quit sure" I say  "one minute they were sitting there all quite and the next I hear YuilHan yelling at him about staying out of her head. Then Jihoon started to laugh at her and said she shouldn't think so loudly so YuilHan shocked him. Then she ran into the air vent and Jihoon flew up to the ceiling and is now up there pouting and most likely whining to Hansol."  

" I am not apologizing to him" YuilHan yells from inside the air vent

"Yuilie you don't have to just come out of there" I say

"Not until he apologizes" she yells back

"Theres no reason for me to" Jihoon yells down to us

"Here move over let me try" says Kris moving me to the side and bending down in front of the air vent.

I sat down next to him in order to get a better look inside, I'm immediatly met with the sigh og Yuilhan's bright red hair and blue and green eyes. YuilHan doesn't have to wear her hood when we're not around humans so right now she has it off.

"Hey YuilHan can you hear me?" Asks Kris

"Yes Kris I can hear you I'm angry not deaf." Yuilhan sasses back

"She's gotta point" I say

"Shut up SoJung" he says "YuilHan if you come out you can go hunting with me tomorrow" says Kris

As soon as he says that her head perks up and her eyes glitter.

"Really?" She asks

"Yep" he says " we might even find some good twigs so we can make you some new arrows."

"Okay" says Yuilie as she crawls out of the air vent then looks up at Jihoon, gives him a dirty look then skips outside to help out Tao and the twins.

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Vay_Kook_ #1
YOUR FIC COMPLETES ME OMFG LET ME LOVE YOU
KouAkira #2
Chapter 13: The plot and story are good. :)

But, I think you should beta for some misspelling and adjust articles to be a paragraph with full tenses which can describe the action or scene smoothly.

I don't know if it happened to me only or not, because I opened the site to read the story on iPhone, and some of your tenses in each paragraph are separated to be one tense in two paragraphs.

For the example from this chapter;
"then I pull out another arrow and let it fly into the head of the human. Theres nothing we can do for them anyway there

is no cure except to be bitten but we're not gonna go around and bite all the humans that get infected not only is"

(It really was like this)

It made me couldn't read your story smoothly and decreased the mood of your story while I read.

Please don't be mad at me for the comment. I like your story, and want to read the next chapters and have fun with your story like the others too. But I just want you to know what I think. :)

And sorry if my English . Because English is not my native and I'm not good at it enough. _(_ _)_
sarahleto
#3
Love this story!