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Serenity's Guardians

Okay so I've done some editing because my jisol ship is pretty much gone and i now ship them with other people so I have taken out Jisoo and put Jihoon in his place and traded Hansol for Seungcheol so it is now Seungcheol and Jihoo. I haven't changed anything besides that but if you want you can go back and re read everything just to get a better feel for the new characters. Thanks for your time and remember to comment, subscribe, and upvote. 

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Vay_Kook_ #1
YOUR FIC COMPLETES ME OMFG LET ME LOVE YOU
KouAkira #2
Chapter 13: The plot and story are good. :)

But, I think you should beta for some misspelling and adjust articles to be a paragraph with full tenses which can describe the action or scene smoothly.

I don't know if it happened to me only or not, because I opened the site to read the story on iPhone, and some of your tenses in each paragraph are separated to be one tense in two paragraphs.

For the example from this chapter;
"then I pull out another arrow and let it fly into the head of the human. Theres nothing we can do for them anyway there

is no cure except to be bitten but we're not gonna go around and bite all the humans that get infected not only is"

(It really was like this)

It made me couldn't read your story smoothly and decreased the mood of your story while I read.

Please don't be mad at me for the comment. I like your story, and want to read the next chapters and have fun with your story like the others too. But I just want you to know what I think. :)

And sorry if my English . Because English is not my native and I'm not good at it enough. _(_ _)_
sarahleto #3
Love this story!
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