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Serenity's Guardians

After Youngguk fainted and SoJung got the other Alpha's mate to stop hyperventalating the two packs make their way back to the gym. "God Hyung is heavy" Seungcheol huffs as He and Jonghyun carry half drag Youngguk towards the gym.

"Seriously, Himchan you need to tell your mate to lay off the..."

"Shh" SoJung hushes cutting off Jonghyun's insult

"listen" YuilHan says calmly everyone goes silent as they listen to their surroundings. Bickering is what they hear coming from the gym and...whinning? They listen for awhile longer trying to figure out if the two creatures in the gym are a threat or not until Amber breaks the silence

"Is that?" Amber says then looking towards her brother with a questioning face

"No it can't be" Jonghyun mumbles "cause around this time would be his...oh god" Jonghyun shakes his head as Amber smiles in amusement. the twins then run towards the gym doors now knowing exactly who is behind them they push open the doors to reveal two boys around the age of 16 sitting in almost the center of the gym.

"No Kwangin-ah stop it" Youngmin mumbles as his younger brother tries to steal another heated kiss from him.

"B-But Youngie" the Youngest whines leaving open mouth kisses up the side of Yougmin's neck

"Ani, Aniya Kwangmin not now" the oldest says forcefully pushing Kwangmin off of his lap and onto the cold Gym floor.

"Yah Jo Youngmin did you just push me?" Kwangmin yells sitting his self pack into his mates lap with a growl. Kwangmin then grabs the back of his Beta's neck smashing their lips together the oldest finally gives into his younger brother and tugs at his bottom lip with his teeth causing the younger to moan. As things start to escalate and Youngmin slips his hand under his mates shirt Jonghyun clears his throat

"Yah what are you two doing in such a public place." he says with an amsued smirk. Youngmin forcefully disconnects his lips from his brother's as he yanked up by the back of his shirt by SoJung

"Yah what do you think your doing bringing your mate here while hes in heat" SoJung scolds

"Thats the reason we came ahead SoJung-ah I needed a proper place to take care of my Omega" Youngmin whines

"Aish your still such a child Jo Youngmin" SoJung mumbles dropping the younger boy back onto the floor next to his mate "when will the rest of your pack be here?"

"A-a-a-about two d-d-days" Youngmin stutters fluster as he forcefully taking his mates hand out of his pant. "i-is there a room that i can t-t-t-take Kwangmin too"

"Amber take Youngmin and his mate to the extra bed in H hall" Sojung says

"Arraso" Amber says motioning for the twins to follow her. Youngmin picks Kwangmin up by the back of his legs making the younger wrap his legs around his waist and his arms around his neck giving the younger access to his mates neck.

"Y-y-yah Kwangmin you better stop that or I'm gonna drop you" Youngmin warns as they follow Amber out of the gym.

"None of us are getting any sleep tonight." Yuilhan says from behind her brother "especially you" she says looking off to her right at Luna "just so you all know" 

"Are you tin me?" Seungcheol groans as he pulls his mate off to their room.

 

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Vay_Kook_ #1
YOUR FIC COMPLETES ME OMFG LET ME LOVE YOU
KouAkira #2
Chapter 13: The plot and story are good. :)

But, I think you should beta for some misspelling and adjust articles to be a paragraph with full tenses which can describe the action or scene smoothly.

I don't know if it happened to me only or not, because I opened the site to read the story on iPhone, and some of your tenses in each paragraph are separated to be one tense in two paragraphs.

For the example from this chapter;
"then I pull out another arrow and let it fly into the head of the human. Theres nothing we can do for them anyway there

is no cure except to be bitten but we're not gonna go around and bite all the humans that get infected not only is"

(It really was like this)

It made me couldn't read your story smoothly and decreased the mood of your story while I read.

Please don't be mad at me for the comment. I like your story, and want to read the next chapters and have fun with your story like the others too. But I just want you to know what I think. :)

And sorry if my English . Because English is not my native and I'm not good at it enough. _(_ _)_
sarahleto
#3
Love this story!