SoJung POV

Serenity's Guardians

My name is SoJung I'm seventeen years old, I am the leader of the Southern pack, I have the power to control the four elements wind, fire, air, and earth. There are four packs Northern, Western, Eastern, and the Southern. The most powerful wolfs are the born ones, the ones that are bitten are lower than betas and alphas but higher than omegas and Deltas as long as they have a pack.

Everyone in my pack but Tao is related The twins Jonghyun and Amber (16), YuilHan (twelve), and Jihoon (sixteen) are also siblings. Kris is my right hand man he is also the oldest in our pack being eighteen. There are six wolfs in my pack, five of them are my cousins; Kris, Jisoo, YuilHan, Amber and Jonghyun. The sixth is Tao, Tao is Kris' mate. He bit him when we were younger but I won't get to into that story because I'm pretty sure they wanna say it themselves.

The year is 2287, the zombie Apocalypse has been going on for almost over two years now. Our job is to save all of the surviving humans and bring them to Serenity where they can live without fear of the zombies. The island is the only thing in the world not touched by the virus it is a small place but big enough for the few survivors of the world. My pack and I are now on our way to one of our old safe houses looking for a group of humans who YuilHan had a vision about needing our help- so now off we go to save more humans.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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sorry its so short I'll make it longer for the next chapter

 

Goodnight

 

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Vay_Kook_ #1
YOUR FIC COMPLETES ME OMFG LET ME LOVE YOU
KouAkira #2
Chapter 13: The plot and story are good. :)

But, I think you should beta for some misspelling and adjust articles to be a paragraph with full tenses which can describe the action or scene smoothly.

I don't know if it happened to me only or not, because I opened the site to read the story on iPhone, and some of your tenses in each paragraph are separated to be one tense in two paragraphs.

For the example from this chapter;
"then I pull out another arrow and let it fly into the head of the human. Theres nothing we can do for them anyway there

is no cure except to be bitten but we're not gonna go around and bite all the humans that get infected not only is"

(It really was like this)

It made me couldn't read your story smoothly and decreased the mood of your story while I read.

Please don't be mad at me for the comment. I like your story, and want to read the next chapters and have fun with your story like the others too. But I just want you to know what I think. :)

And sorry if my English . Because English is not my native and I'm not good at it enough. _(_ _)_
sarahleto
#3
Love this story!