Chapter 45: Fate or Not

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http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=numgQ8TpBDw ~ sad song.. ( haha it seems like i'm introducing songs from different dramas LOL;) )

 

 

 "I'm sorry. But none of you are suitable donors."

 "What do you mean we aren't?! Her father is overseas and you said she doesn't have much time!!" Hana cried.

 "I'm really sorry. There's nothing you can do but to wait. " The doctor said before he went to see another patient.

 "How did this happen??" Hana sobbed.

 Hyo ri arrived soon. She glanced at Luhan for a moment, but turned back to Hana. "What happened??" 

"Kourin... she needs a kidney. Urgently."

 


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 "There's... nothing we can do now" Hyo ri said as a tear fell. "She won't die, right?"

  "Yah, what are you saying?! Of course she won't." Hana sighed. "Eotteoke... even you are not able to help. We can do nothing but wait now" She bit her lip.

 

 

 "Ok. You can be discharged now" The doctor said.

  The woman nodded and stumbled out of her room. She had been ill nowadays, but she couldn't stay long as the hospital fees were expensive.

 Then she heard someone saying her daughter's name. 

 

 Behind a pillar, a tear trickled down the old face. "Kourin-ah... omma will save you... please be strong"

 

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 "Now's not the time to talk about it." Hyo ri harshly shoved Luhan's hand away. They had just left the hospital, but Luhan had stopped her before she could reach the traffic light.

 "I-i know.. i just want to clear our misunderstanding. I'm not gay." Luhan insisted.

 Hyo ri sighed. "Whatever. After what happened to Kourin.. i just want to go home and rest."

 "Listen" Luhan said, grabbing Hyo ri's wrist. "Kourin knows about it too.    We've been friends since kindergarten, so.. maybe Kai was abit too rash.. Hyo ri, you have to believe me. I was telling Kai about us, and.. he just.. he.. just did ... that"

 Hyo ri crossed her arms and faced him. "Why? Why do you want me to believe you when you don't even believe me? Shouldn't you be angry at me instead of trying to clear your innocence??"

 "I..i just didn't want this misunderstanding to ruin our friendship, you know... i.. i miss you."


  Hyo ri slowly nodded. "You know.. i still haven't agreed to breaking up with you. It was only you who said we broke up. But now... " She took in a breath," We are officially breaking up. I still had feelings for you. I was very hurt when you didn't believe me. I was your girlfriend" Tears started forming on Hyo ri's eyes.

 "You didn't even try to listen to my explanation. Yet you listen to Kourin and try to hear my explanation after she told you that you might be misunderstanding me. Even you didn't listen to Kai."Hyo ri said. "..I know. When you went to the toilet...Kai told me that Kourin liked you. And that you like her back." 

 "I..i don't know.. i like Kourin, but.. i also like you. I..i don't know what i feel now... but I still have feelings for you.."

 She choked back her tears, and gave a small, bitter smile. She didn't want to give herself hope only to be dissapointed again. She just wanted all of these to stop. "I'm the third party, although Kourin came in later. Don't you see?? She.. saved your life. If it wasn't for her.. you would've died. It's just.. meant to be. Isn't it??" She quickly faced away from Luhan, not wanting to let him see her hurt this way. "And.. you wanted to know about Dong Gun. Well.. mom warned him to never show up infront of us again."

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D