Chapter 23: Disaster strikes

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  Luhan's eyes widened. What did he just hear?! He stood there , speechless. It was Sehun that ran forward towards her,and shouted,"let her go! " The guy that still had his grip on her tightened his grip even more. 

  "You stay far away or i'll hurt her even more!" The guy threatened. 

  " You what... ..?!" Luhan just managed to process what Dasom had said. Kourin's eyes widened. He musn't think that way..!

    "It..it wasn't like that..," Kourin started desperately, but was interuptted by the deafening roar coming from behind her when Sehun took out his phone, about to call the police.

  "You put the phone DOWN!" The guy growled, pressing his hand harder against Kourin's throat until she started choking and gasping for air desperately. 

  " P-Pleasee.." Kourin cried. "All right, all right, chill, dude.." Sehun lifted both his hands up, and dropped his phone onto the floor in surrender.

  "Please just let her go.., we wont tell anyone, okay?" Sehun said. " Oh, like anyone would believe you!" The guy mocked .

  In a swift second, before anyone could even blink, Sehun appeared next to Dasom, his arm over her neck." ..Let go! let goo.! " She sceeched." let her go!!" The guy shouted . "Kourin for Dasom." Sehun bargained, and pressed his hand so hard on Dasom's neck that she started choking and her breathing become so ragged and heavy. Tears found their way down her cheeks." Don't, Sehun!" Kourin shouted.

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D