Chapter 33: Afraid

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 "...And, Luhan was so scared i'm sure he peed his pants!!"Hana started laughing madly.Luhan glared at her and his cheeks turned pink . He just made a fool of himself! "If i hadn't noticed you were running towards a drain you would've got injured! You should've seen your face when you saw her!"Kourin added, giggling madly.

 "Hyo Ri, what low taste you have"Hana whispered to her, but made it loud enough for all of them to hear. "Yah, you.."Luhan pouted.

 They were all gathered in the girls' tent, talking about their day and teasing Luhan about the night walk. Suddenly, a patch of light appeared at the side of the tent. Hana turned to look, and Hana's mouth hung wide open, forming an 'o' shape. She flung a hand to , stifling a scream, and hung onto Kai's hand tightly, who was sitting beside her."G-g-guys..."She gaped. 

 Luhan rolled his eyes.Like that would fool him."Seriously Hana.. ain't gona trick me" "Then look!"She cried, hiding her face in Kai's arms.

 "Hello?"A foreign voice could be heard from outside the tent. Luhan turned, not believing Hana's words. What he saw made his mouth turn to a 'o' shape just like Hana's . He pointed a trembling finger at the figure."W-what's t-th-that??!!! "He croaked.

 Soon everyone turned and the girls helplessly clung to each other at the sight. The green slimy face with an evil smile seemed so near now."HELPP!!""GHost!!!!""YAHHH"

 

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 Dasom turned around to see what the commotion was all about. She was still early for the flight anyway, so she decided to go check it out. 

 A guy was lying on the cold concrete tiles , blood smeared on his face. "What the.."A hand flung to . Why was she here again? 

 "Please keep away, we need to give him air."A guy instructed , trying to keep the people away before dailing the ambulance. Now, she could see the guy's face clearly... and it seemed a lot like.. no.. it couldn't be.... why would he be here anyway?! 

 Dasom lunged towards him and crouched over his unconcious body. Tears fell from her eyes and she held on to his hand tightly."Kris..!!! Y-you can't... please!!! You can't.... You have to be strong! Be strong, Kris, Please..!!"She cried.

 


 Dasom continued holding onto his hand as they pushed him to the emergency room. The door closed, leaving her alone outside. She sat on the seat, and clasped her hands together. "Please please please let him be okay... "She cried. She felt like she was going through a similar situation to what happened to Jimin. She felt like she was bad luck, that people would die around her. Oh why was must this happen! 

 


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 "GHOST!!!!!"Soyu cried, hugging onto Hyo Ri tightly. Then, a muffled laughter could be heard from the 'ghost'. The once 'ghost' now became a human as the boy removed his mask."HAHAHAH. That was hilarious!!!! You should've seen your faces!"He laughed." Anyway, you guys better get back to your tent. He said, no boys allowed to go to the girl's tent or the opposite, remember? You guys better get back before he comes to spot check in 10 minutes' time."

 "Okay. Thanks for reminding"Luhan said before he and Kai left.Soon the girls' tent went back to darkness. "I almost had a heart attack, thank you very much"Soyu complained.

 

 


 The next day they all had to climb the hig

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D