Chapter 15: Secret

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Sorry for not updating frequently.... it was exam week for the last two weeks, so.. yea...... don't be sad.... smile smile ;)

    "Come on...i told you it was an accident... stop ignoring me,ok?"

     "Stop pestering me. I just don't feel like talking to you."

    Kris ignored that. "Come on... forgive me, alright?" 

    Kourin sighed. "Look , i forgive you. i just.. wanna be alone, ok" She slammed the door shut.School had just ended and Kourin hadn't spoken a word to him since that incident. Kris hung around her house for a minute or two before trudging back home.

     Just then, Kourin's phone rang. She groaned. It must be from Kris, she thought, can't he understand I need to be alone right now?? She was about to decline it when she saw the caller ID. She gulped.

     Why, of all times, must Kai call now?? Facing him in school was already very awkward for her. She took a deep breath before answering the call.

     "Hey"Kourin said, trying to sound happy. It sounded like she was being tortured.

      "Hey, what took you so long to answer?Anyways, wanna have lunch together today? Like a date? I'm outside your house now, by the way" How happy Kai sounded! If only he knew about what happened. He wouldn't be so chirpy then.

      She glanced out the window only to see Kai leaning against his car, doing a pose. She smiled at that. But only for a second. It was only then that she realized how dashing Kai actually looked.

        Kourin entered the car soon after. Her mind couldn't seem to get off what happened earlier that morning. The more she looked at Kai, the guiltier she felt. That night...she slept with Kris.. she shuddered at the thought. I betrayed Kai..stop! stop!! I must stop thinking about this, right now! Bu

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D