Chapter 29: Cheated

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   "H-hyo.. hyo Jin..?"He choked. He couldn't be seeing things.But it is. Hyo Jin smiled when she saw Dong Gun."I finally found you. I had to find out so much and ask many people where you lived and all, but it was worth it. You're taking a surgeon course now, right? Dong Gun, back then i didn't have guts to say this, but now i do. I realized how much i missed you and once i had my chance i came all the way here just to see you. I couldn't wait any longer. Can i.. be your girlfriend?"She smiled shyly.

  Dong Gun gulped. Wait, what.. did she just say?He was about to reject her politely but a thought struck him. Hyo Ri hated her sister. Hyo Jin always made her life difficult and he couldn't stop her like that because he was afraid to lose their friendship and probably the chance to see Hyo Ri again.

  But now he had no obstruction. Now, he'll make Hyo Jin's life hell, and make her pay for what she had done to her own sister.He smiled back sweetly. "Yes. I missed you alot too"

  After he passed the surgeon course he booked the plane back home, where he would find his dear Hyo Ri. He had asked one of his friends back home to follow Hyo Ri and report to him on her whereabouts just after graduation.

  Hanging out with Hyo Jin for a while(unwillingly) he realized all she EVER talked about was about buying a mansion, their future, her future wedding dress and all. Ha. If only she knew he agreed to be her boyfriend to avenge her sister. She'd be crying like a baby and regret mistreating her sister. Bleh. He smirked at the thought. Hmm. All she talked about was money.. did she come to him just because he is going to be a surgeon? Either way.. she would not get what she want.


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  "Hmm.. hope she will like this.. "Luhan said, smelling the aroma-rich flower like a drug. He chuckled to himself,"It will be a surprise, but at least she won't be lonely. And it will be like a double date. Hmm, the sister she dislikes having a date while she has me. It can be a double wedding!" He quickened his footsteps, wanting to arrive there before her sister does.


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  "Yah, why did you book such an early flight?! You told mom we would arrive at 11 am!" Hyo Jin complained as they board the plane. "I need my beauty sleep, you know."

  "You can still sleep on the plane you know"Dong Gun pointed out."I want to give them a surprise"

  "Yah, you! Sleeping in a plane is different! I'm sure i won't be able to sleep now.."Hyo Jin huffed.

 


  "I'll go get that" Hyo Ri said, placing her book down. Who could be here at this hour? It couldn't be sis, it was only 9am.

  Her eyes widened when she saw who it was."W-why are you here.. err.. i mean.. heyyy.. eonnie...! It's good to see you! Er.. come in."She tried to act excited, but she knew it was too fake. Grr how she hated Acting.  Her mother had told her to act excited when she saw how upset she was that her sister is returning.

   I know you don't like your sister, but she's still your unnie after all. She'll be upset if she saw how unhappy you are when she return, her mother had said.

  "Pfft. Arrgh eonnie!! You're back!!!"Hyo Ri tried, but her mother shook her head. Too enthusiastic, she said. "urgh mom! I'm either too unenthusiastic or too enthusiastic, what do you what me to do!" "All right, all right

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D