Chapter 28: Hard Past

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  "Sis is marrying.. Dong Gun..?" Hyo Ri gulped. Even saying his name now is hard.


5 years ago~

  "This is my friend, Dong Gun. " Hyo Jin introduced. "Er.. hi.."Hyo Ri waved . After awhile of introduction Hyo Ri pushed her sister into her room and closed the door.

  "Eonni! Is he your boyfriend?? omo.. i wish i were you.. he's so good-looking!"Hyo Jin chuckled. "He's not. I wish" "Omo! That means you like him! Eonni, fighting!"Hyo Ri grinned widely.


  Who would believe both sisters were very close with each other before Dong Gun entered their lives? That it was a boy that turned the sisters against each other?

  "Hyo Jin ah, your dong-saeng's really cute"Dong Gun would say randomly, making Hyo Jin jealous and Hyo Ri red.The three would hang out after school everyday.

  He would mess with both sisters, and sometimes Hyo Jin wished she hadn't introduced her friend to her dong-saeng. Sometimes, Hyo Ri wished so too. That guy was simply irresistable. Hyo Jin knew Hyo Ri liked Dong Gun too, but she swore that even though she was her dong-saeng she isn't going to let her have Dong Gun. And Hyo Ri knew she couldn't have Dong Gun. But she simply liked him around. He was fun to be with, always so optimistic and crazy, sometimes over- dramatic.

  This small 'crush' on Dong Gun turned into hatred between both sisters when one day, Hyo Ri sprained her ankle.

  "Hyo Ri ah, can you walk?"Dong Gun asked worriedly. She nodded, but winces everytime she took a step. "Here, let me carry you"He piggybacked her home while Hyo Jin  followed them angrily, upset that her dong-saeng got all the attantion.

  Dong Gun helped apply ointment on Hyo Ri's ankle while Hyo Jin sat beside her watching quietly. After a moment, she couldn't take it anymore, so she pretended to have a stomacheache. "Arrgh"She groaned while clutching her tummy.

  Dong Gun looked at her worriedly. "Hyo jin ah.. are you alright..? Do you need to see a doctor? Both sisters can't be sick now!"He pretended to be overly horrified. Sometimes his acting was so good, they can't figure out whether he was lying.

  Dong Gun then helped Hyo Jin up, and they were about to head to the door when Hyo jin cleared saying she will be fine after some rest. He helped her to her room, and was about to leave when he gave Hyo Ri a soft peck on her cheek as she saw him out."Take care of your ankle, dong-saeng"he winked. Hyo Ri's hand flew to . Dong Gun.. kissed her?? On her cheek! He had never done that to Hyo Jin! She smiled secretly, even though she knew she was just giving herself false hope. After all, to him , she was just a younger sister. 

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D