Chapter 30: Unintended

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  "Hey, why do you ask me out so urgently?"Hyo Ri asked when she reached the park.

  Luhan looked at her hard. He couldn't believe she could just cheat him like this and pretend nothing ever happened. But he didn't feel like punching the guy or anything like in dramas. Instead he felt calm and just dissapointed with her. 


  "Let's.. break up"


  Hyo Ri just stared at him, dumbfounded. "W-why?"
"Up till now, are you still gona pretend like nothing happened?! "He growled."You could've told me or something.. instead of.. cheating on me! I'll .. i'll congratulate you both!"Not. Why would he? 
He couldn't believe Hyo Ri was the same as Kourin. Cheating on their bfs, yeesh. "I-wha-what are you talking about??" Hyo Ri looked at him innocently.


  "Do you NEED me to spell it out?! Yeesh. I don't want anything to do with you now"He stomped away, but Hyo Ri grabbed his hand. "I-i don't u-understand"She said, her voice trembling slightly. What did she do wrong to deserve this treatment?


  He shoved her hand away roughly before scurrying off. "L-luhan!" Hyo Ri called, but he was gone before long.
The news spread like wildfire and soon everyone found out Luhan broke up with Hyo Ri. "Dont be so sad.. we'll help you try and find Luhan after class, ok? " Hana reassured her. Luhan ignored everyone in class, and once it was recess he had dissappeared. 


  Kai finally found him under a stairway, and told Hyo Ri to explain things to him clearly and carefully.She sighed. She couldn't think of anything that she had done that would upset Luhan. He was still cheerful when she last saw him before her sister's return celebration. So what could be.....


  No. No way. He wasn't there anyway. Hyo Ri thought as she concluded that he must've seen Dong Gun kiss her. Why would he be there anyway?? Urggh everything was so confusing to her right now.
"Are you gona go in or are you just gona stand there?"Hana asked, carefull not to speak too loud so Luhan wouldn't hear her. 


  Hyo Ri sighed and walked in slowly. Luhan's eyes widened when he saw Hyo Ri . He quickly got up, not looking at her."Didn't i tell you i don't want to see you."Hyo Ri grabbed onto his arm before he could leave. 


  "Why? Why are you doing this? What have i done really??"She demanded. Luhan glared at her."If you really don't know, then why did the guy kiss you on the day of your sis' return celebration? Instead of me... "He said, exceptionally calm. 


  Hyo R

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D