Chapter 31: After a long time

Love Literally
Please Subscribe to read the full chapter

http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=iqu622RjoGY  I find that this song fits this chapter^~ but if you dont find it.. then just ignore it😝 XD 

 

  Kourin was frozen to the ground, unable to move. She so wanted to turn and run away, far away, anywhere, away from this.. monster. Yes, she did turn in, but that didn't mean she had changed for the better. That didn't mean she regretted doing that.. ok.. maybe yes, but still.. she was still quite scary to Kourin. Just the sight of her made Kourin quiver in fear. 

 "K-Kourin..."Dasom finally breathed. Hearing her name, Kourin quickly turned. But her next words caught her off guard.

 "I-i'm.. s-sorry.., kourin..."Dasom started. She looked down to the ground. 

 Kourin looked away, not knowing what to say."O-Okay.." 

 There was an awkward silence before Kourin broke it."I-i should go"She said, making her way back home. Dasom nodded, and climbed up the steps.

 Once she reached the traffic light, Kourin looked back, only to see Dasom sitting on the swing, looking so.. lost. Wait.. hadn't she climbed up the bridge? The traffic light turned to green man, but she went the opposite way.

 

 

-

 

"So.. you forgot where you lived?"Kourin asked ,taking a sip of her mocha."mm..not really, i just kindof forgot the way.." Dasom replied. "Are you.. ok..?"

 Kourin slowly nodded. Her eyes started to water as she recalled what Dasom and her friend did to her and her friends. She didn't know how she managed to remain so calm in her presence. How could she sit down here with her now, drinking mocha peacefully?

 Ok, maybe not so peacefully since her heartbeat was quickening and her whole body seemed to be unable to stop shaking.Dasom bit down on her lip at Kourin's reaction. Is she that scary? Oh, right. She caused her to be in coma and her friends to be injured. What was she thinking?! Doing all these just because of one boy?! She almost became a MURDERER! How

Please Subscribe to read the full chapter
Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D