Chapter 20

Love Literally
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   It was the start of a new term, they all had to change seats. Hyo Ri was to sit with a random girl she wasn't close with, Kai with Soyu, Hana with a random girl she wasn't close with, and Kourin with Luhan.     "Hey..." Kai suddenly asked Kourin during recess,"Are you free today? Let's have lunch together?"    It was one of the rare days both of them were free, so she agreed.    They were having lunch when Kourin took out a box and placed it on the table. "For you," She said.    "For me? " Kai took it,"Sorry.. I didn't buy any gift for you.."    "It's fine. You always get me gifts on our dates. It's my turn to."    Kai opened the box . It was a shoe. He tried it on, and it fit. "It's lovely. But how do you know my shoe size?"   Kourin smiled secretively. "I see and know everything"   "Mm. Wait here. I need to go to the toilet."Kai said.   When he was gone, his phone suddenly rang. Kourin picked it up, and seeing that it was from his CCA coach, she answered it. If it was anything important, she could relay it to Kai.    "Kai!" A gruff voice answered. "You said you had some important things to do. Unless you have mc, you aren't supposed to skip training! What could be so important??"    Hearing that, she quickly murmured a 'sorry' , not wanting the coach to recognise it wasn't Kai, then hung up.    Kai showed up a few minutes. "What took you so long?"   He smiled."Don't blink. I'll show you magic." He revealed a bracelet."Ta-da. I saw you eyeing it when we were walking past the shop." But he stopped talking when he saw Kourin's angry expression. "What? You don't like it? I can buy you another- "    "Kai. You shouldn't've skipped training to have lunch with me. I feel so guilty."    "Come on... Theres nothing to be guilty about. Skipping for an hour plus won't matter. "      "Yes it does. It'll affect your CCA attendance."     " Come on. It's no big deal. "     "Look, Kai... It's just... You keep giving me so much and showering me with gifts. I don't feel like i.. You know, like i've been a good girlfriend. I don't even know what to buy for you.It was Luhan who recommended me to get a shoe for you. Even Luhan knows what you like, an
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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D