Chapter 24: How long more..

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  Kourin woke to the sound of the monitor beeping. But somehow.. She just couldn't open her eyes. Her body felt limp and numb,and she couldn't even move an inch. What was wrong ?! What is happening??! She felt so .. So.. 

  Lost...

  She tried to think back. What.. What happened before she became like this? She remembered her name was Kourin.., and.. And...

  Luhan. Sehun.

  She tried to move, she tried to get up, but to no avail. Her face was twisted in agony, and her index finger twitched.

  "Did you see that?" A voice said. It was kai..

  He knew ,didn't he? He knew.. Kourin thought as she felt him squeezing her hand. But.. If he knew... Would he still visit me..? Didn't Luhan tell him? But why couldn't i move?

  "Yea" Kourin heard Luhan's voice. "Are you sure you're all right? U don't wanna rest?" Kai asked his buddy. Beside her, she could hear two girls sobbing away. "Kourin.. I know you're strong. Please wake up soon. We 're all so worried. Your dad even skipped an important meeting and came all the way from overseas just to know you're safe. We're all here for you. Aren't you even touched? Please wake up.." Hana said, her voice breaking.

  "Kourin.I know you can hear us.The doctor said you are in coma, and can still hear us. I love you, and i'll love you always. Please wake up .."Kai pleaded.

  "Aww.. See, your boyfriend's so loving, so won't you wake up already?" She heard Hyo Ri sob. "Yea

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Pikapikachu001 #1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE #2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE #3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo #4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann #5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz #8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz #10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D
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