Chapter 3: Weird or not?

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  It was awkward between us, especially when the teacher told us to work with our partners on some worksheets, so i decided to start a conversation with him.

  I cleared my throat. " Hi... I'm Kourin. Why did you run away when i approached you earlier this morning? Am i that scary or what? Not that i meant to scare you or anything, BUT you really shouldn't litter you know."

  "Oh" I heard him sigh. Yes, sigh. Was it just me, or... did i just feel that he sighed in relief?

  Did he... think that i was gonna scold him or report the matter? Wow...

  Well, whatever. At least i can be pretty sure he won't litter again.. i guess.

 

~During Recess~

 

  "Hey, how's that Kai guy?" Hana asked. I could almost see her eyes glowing with interest.

  "Well he's weird, and timid. He was actually afraid of me!"

  "What? Why?"

  "Well this morning he littered-"

  "He was the one?"

  "Can you not cut me? I havn't finished. And yes, it was him."

  "Okay, okay.."

  "I was gonna scold him-"

  " You should'nt've scold-" Hana interrupted, but stopped when i glared at her. " Continue..?"

  "I said i was gonna, but i didn't. Well, i didn't manage to. WHen he saw me he just ran off. And i heard him sigh in kinda like.. relief when i told him about it in class. Like as if he was afraid i'd scold him or something. Anyways, i can be sure he won't dare litter again!" I fininshed, smiling to myself.

  "Waa. But he is such a cutie, isn't he?" I rolled my eyes at that. And i swear i heard her mutter to herself," Hmm. I won't mind if he's timid.. in fact,i think that"s what i'll like about him, for he'll listen to me!"

 

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Pikapikachu001
#1
Chapter 17: Not that bad but you can improve a lot! But the story is pretty good so far! and this chapter's ending tho ;-; cliffhanger much? ;-; Anyway! I swear I'm gonna finish this story today! >:3 This is like my first EXO fanfic and like i said its not bad! :3
prod_GLEE
#2
Chapter 24: You shut me up about after chapter 5 or something cause your writing kept getting better! I was actually surprised and wondered if the person who wrote this angsty chapter was actually the same person who wrote such joyful chapters at the beginning.
This is actually very interesting, I have absolutely no idea whats going to happen next.
Anyways up til this chapter I have School Days (japanese anime/ visual novel) vibe from this story. Not that tragic but still...
prod_GLEE
#3
Chapter 5: I actually cracked up at some parts. This turns out pretty fun to read althought the writing is not good (this is one of your breakout works so yeah, everyone starts from scratch).
endlessxoxo
#4
Chapter 49: took me a while but finally finished!
I love this story and the ending is so sad and beautiful at the same time :]
hopefully Kourin finds someone else and her life turns out happy - even if Luhan and Hyo Ri liked each other it still made my heart break for her :D
anyways, this was a great story!
Sojeann
#5
Chapter 49: WOW! I love it from the beginning until the end, timeline or the plot, scenes and scenery, twist and turns and last the fluff not only by the main but also by the others. I feel all the emotion that fill in this story through each character and scenes. How sad I was in the end I was really looking forward for more but what I can do your the author and you want to end it here. You really love to cliff hang your readers. Oh I hope you made a epilogue to this one I want Kourin also be love by someone also. I totally imagined I was the girls in this story how happy I would be loving by that kind of man and be with arms but I don't know who I want to be in the end maybe for now it will be Kourin even my bias was Luhan. I remember one of your author note you said you got blank on what will you write it was okay if you can't update soon we could understand and there is some typo error here and I can't figure the parts of the last few chapter if it was a flashback or something and you also put the part of the previous chapter on the next one I don't know if it was like that or you made mistakes please check it again thank you. I can't say more. I just totally like and love this. Sorry for being silent reader. Keep it up the good work. Good luck and God bless. See you on your other stories. I'm looking forward to read more of your work
Bleak_night #6
I'll start reading, i find it interesting ^^
wonremoo #7
Chapter 40: Hyo Jin is really cunning! Didn't expect that LOL
Khairunnisaaz
#8
Chapter 25: OMG your story got interesting! I really felt like killing dasom in this story LOL. I regret not reading your updates earlier hehe sorry ><
madesunrene75 #9
THis is amazing!
Khairunnisaaz
#10
Chapter 3: I like your story so far! But you can try to make it longer. :) I absolutely love long stories :D