Truth and Lies

Poems and Metaphors

 

Truth and Lies

-jiraniku, 2008

 

I hate the way your hair falls down

on your face

I hate the way your teeth show

when you smile

I hate the way my heart skips

when you say my name

I hate that you sit beside me

asking stupid questions

I like how you are often quiet,

lost in your thoughts

I like that you are too kind,

too good to be true

I like that you feel you can talk to me

about her

I like that you think of me as a friend

I hate being your friend

 

                                                                                                           

 

 

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pilyangsweet #1
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wenkie0414 #2
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TOPalmond #3
Chapter 27: when the first time i read thia story, i was in my 3rd year of college and took an further studies in prose. i was in awe when i read your poetry bcs i couldnt write a good poem at that time and i envy you for sure. now that im graduated and did not dealing with words again, i suddenly miss your writing and tempt to write ones.

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carolinebestever #4
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peppiwelsh1 #5
2nd read and still brings out fresh feelings as if I've read it for the first time.
phEnxx #6
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Crystalic607 #8
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#9
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rOsEjOOng
#10
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