The Beach

Poems and Metaphors

 

The Beach

-ukinarij, 2006

 

Down by the beach

                                   Where you and I stood

The sun was high

And the sky was blue

Clouds drifted by

And the seabirds flew

 

Down by the beach

                                   Where you and I stayed

The waves were crashing

Over the powdery sand

The wind was blowing

From a far-off land

 

Down by the beach

                                  Where you and I talked

The sea was shimmering

From the radiant heat

The trees were swaying

To an unknown beat

 

You looked at the sea

Then smiled at me

My heart was pounding

And I felt like fainting

Down by the beach

                                 Where you and I stood

 

Then our time was up

Though I wish it stopped

Cause I’ve never felt more alone

As we returned home

Away from the beach

                           Where you and I stood

 

 

 

 

 

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pilyangsweet #1
Chapter 27: Ur such a talented writer.... Ur stories are simple and heartwarming to read...I can't stop reading it even if keep telling to myself...just one more chapter then I will sleep...but I end up finishing it...kekeke!!!

Reading ur stories lessen my stress.....thank for writing wonderful stories...
wenkie0414 #2
Chapter 27: gosh i love ur storiesssssssss
TOPalmond #3
Chapter 27: when the first time i read thia story, i was in my 3rd year of college and took an further studies in prose. i was in awe when i read your poetry bcs i couldnt write a good poem at that time and i envy you for sure. now that im graduated and did not dealing with words again, i suddenly miss your writing and tempt to write ones.

please dont closed your account here on AFF, so whenever i kinda miss beautiful story, i'll come by and read your stories all over again. thank you, unnie.
carolinebestever #4
Chapter 27: geez! i love your poems... its awesome! ^^
peppiwelsh1 #5
2nd read and still brings out fresh feelings as if I've read it for the first time.
phEnxx #6
Chapter 27: I love it and your words really touch my heart ...
Crystalic607 #7
Chapter 1: You have so much potential to be an author or something! your writings, feelings thoughts is just -!!!
Crystalic607 #8
Chapter 27: Amazing. Love your writing and your poems so much <333
rOsEjOOng
#9
Chapter 27: Beautiful..
just way too beautiful author nim!! your poems are really beautiful..it gives a heart warming feeling<3
rOsEjOOng
#10
Chapter 1: Superb starting!! i'm loving it even though I just started..^^