Insatiable

Poems and Metaphors

 

Poetry is ordinary language raised to the Nth power.

Poetry is boned with ideas, nerved and blooded with emotions,

all held together by the delicate, tough skin of words.
Paul Engle
 

 

However, it turns out that Yoona was also insatiable for his love notes, demanding to receive his professes of love regularly.

 

 

 

And so Jiyong and I have been meeting secretly like conspirators in a spy movie. We’d meet after school in my house or his, at the library or in the park, working out love notes to give Yoona.

 

It sends me a cheap thrill to be able to hang out with him especially in secret. It almost seemed like we were friends, but I remind myself that he was just doing consultations about Yoona, making sure that the spark never runs out between them. Although sometimes, we’d do more and end up doing our homework together and eating at each other’s houses.

 

 

So here I am, trying to spew out love notes to help Jiyong keep Yoona.  They didn’t have to be the best but whatever, Yoona eats them up like candy.

 

 

 

The wind whispers your name

My heart gladly listens

 

 

If there is no sun, there is the moon

If there is no moon, there are the stars

If there are no stars, there is you

To light up my life

 

 

 

Every snowflake is unique

Just like you are beautifully different

 

 

 

Last night, the cicadas played a lovely beat

Much like how my heart beats your name

 

 

 

Just like no one has seen the edge of the universe

My love for you is endless

 

 

 

The sun would not set today

As I refuse to let this day with you end

 

 

 

 

I don’t know how long I could keep this up. I haven’t been able to help anyone else but Ji, all because of the insatiable and lovely Yoona.

 

Because for as long as he keeps her happy with his romantic words, Yoona is his.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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pilyangsweet #1
Chapter 27: Ur such a talented writer.... Ur stories are simple and heartwarming to read...I can't stop reading it even if keep telling to myself...just one more chapter then I will sleep...but I end up finishing it...kekeke!!!

Reading ur stories lessen my stress.....thank for writing wonderful stories...
wenkie0414 #2
Chapter 27: gosh i love ur storiesssssssss
TOPalmond #3
Chapter 27: when the first time i read thia story, i was in my 3rd year of college and took an further studies in prose. i was in awe when i read your poetry bcs i couldnt write a good poem at that time and i envy you for sure. now that im graduated and did not dealing with words again, i suddenly miss your writing and tempt to write ones.

please dont closed your account here on AFF, so whenever i kinda miss beautiful story, i'll come by and read your stories all over again. thank you, unnie.
carolinebestever #4
Chapter 27: geez! i love your poems... its awesome! ^^
peppiwelsh1 #5
2nd read and still brings out fresh feelings as if I've read it for the first time.
phEnxx #6
Chapter 27: I love it and your words really touch my heart ...
Crystalic607 #7
Chapter 1: You have so much potential to be an author or something! your writings, feelings thoughts is just -!!!
Crystalic607 #8
Chapter 27: Amazing. Love your writing and your poems so much <333
rOsEjOOng
#9
Chapter 27: Beautiful..
just way too beautiful author nim!! your poems are really beautiful..it gives a heart warming feeling<3
rOsEjOOng
#10
Chapter 1: Superb starting!! i'm loving it even though I just started..^^