SHINee fever!

How SHINee changes my life.

"I wanted to introduce you to my SHINee members." "Oh.." "Mind to spare some time?" "Sure but can i bring Miki along?" "Of course! Let's go!" 

We stopped in a park. I see a group of boy playing soccer. "Everyone! I brought her!" They stopped playing and run towards Jonghyun. 

"This is Onew, Key, Minho and Taemin" "Annyeong!! ^^" "Annyeong i'm HyunMi and this is Miki" Miki just shyly waved. Taemin asked us, "Are you both younger than me? I'm 20" "We're 18." "So i'm oppa!" "Yeahh.." 

 

i see Miki blushing. She must has liked one of them. I secretly asked her and she told me that Minho was cute. 

 

"So you're the girl that Jonghyun has been talking about? HyunMi the cutie?" Key asked. I stood there, dazed. "Yah! KimKibum!" "Jonghyun has been talking about you the past few days. " Jonghyun started chasing Key around. Without my notice, Minho was talking to Miki. 

Go Miki! I see improvements! 

"Hi. Would you like to play with us?" Onew asked shyly with his head down. "Yeah yeah play with us!" said Taemin happily. Jonghyun and Key returned. 

 

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Hyun_Mi04 #1
Although this is your first fic, it's good enough! ^^
kimyen #2
Chapter 32: please make a season 2 ^^
Hyper27
#3
Chapter 31: Hehe! Soooo cute jonghyun! He's definitely the cutest Dino in the world!
LocketGrl
#4
Chapter 4: Okay I was able to get through the first two chapters alright but if you are going to be writing in first person, shouldn't the grammar be more correct? I am not bashing the story and I like the plot idea but its the way you write with your grammar mistakes that make it hard to read. But I wish you luck with the story, good plot as I said before.