Chapter 8

What Happens in Seoul
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[Korean dialogue will be displayed in red]

~Natalie’s POV~

 

We all walked over to the patio where they had already brought the cake out. The sun was almost below the horizon, and as Minho lit the candles, they glowed brightly in the muted dusk light.

 

"Saengil chooka hamnida, Saengil chooka hamnida!" everybody chorused, singing happy birthday in Korean. Taemin blew out the candles and cut everybody a piece of the cake. I'm not quite sure how it began, but somehow an icing war broke out as people were trying to catapult icing at each other using their spoons. I tried to stay out of it, so I was one of the only people without icing on me. That is until Taemin was aiming another shot at Jonghyun, but at the last moment, Jonghyun ducked to the side, and the icing hit me right in the face. A chorus of oooooooooh's erupted from everyone around me as I glared at Taemin, whose jaw had practically dropped to the floor. I, of course, do not go without revenge. I stood up, grabbing some of the icing off the top of my cake with my finger.

 

"Mianhamnida, mianhamnida!" Taemin said as he tried to back away from me, causing him to almost trip over one of the chairs. I looked at the icing on my hand, and then smeared it across the side of Taemin's face. A few people burst out laughing, and Taemin tried to recover. I screamed as he smeared icing across my cheek, and the laughter only continued as an icing frenzy broke out once again. When I looked at him again, even Taemin was laughing. But not for long. I eyed the piece of cake that was on the plate in his hand, then pushed the whole thing into his face. Everybody there exploded into laughter, and Taemin could do nothing more to fight back; his ammunition was gone.

 

I sat down next to Taemin and we both couldn't stop laughing. He fared a lot worse than I did though, so I helped him wipe the cake off his face with a towel Onew had retrieved.

 

"Mianhae, Taemin-ah," I said, pinching his cheek, and we both laughed again. Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Seunghyun watching us warily, like something was bothering him. He had almost the same expression as he did when Taemin had hugged me...

 

Either way, he seemed troubled, so I got up and went over to him hoping I could cheer him up. As soon as I sat down beside him, his face seemed to brighten.

 

Taemin, finally giving up on getting off all of the cake, stood up. "I've got to go wash up," he said, heading inside.

 

I noticed Minho eyeing the basketball courts across the road. "Hey, you guys want to play basketball?" he asked.

 

"SHINee vs. FT Island?" Hongki su

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sillyhappyperson
#1
this was a really cute story, i was sad reading seunghyun cutting himself,(seunghyun biased) and for the entire time through natalie's relationship with hongki was just going poor seunghyun (i'm a dreadful person to hongki, i don't give him enough love, it's all gone to seunghyun) and i really liked it and now i'll go wander and look at the rest of your stories ^.^ hehe (and if there's a sequel i'm interested in reading, hint hint, wink wink)
lildragonkpopislife #2
Please do a sequel!!! Love your stories.
Silentgirl34
#3
Wow! This story is amazing. I've read some stories about F.T Island and for me this story is ranked 2nd best! Good Luck!in writing more stories. I'll be very excited if there's a sequel.
Hwaiting!
jaceBlue #4
OMG I really really love your story! I hope I also have the same courage as yours to write my story.. Good job there ^^
Anonymous_15 #5
Such a cool and fun story.
NeonDreams
#6
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate all the love and support ♥~ ^^<br />
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-kohaku
#7
Sequel it's such a cool story :-) ^^
Jang_Deny_Chan #8
DONE!!!! Really nice ending!!!!! ^_^...but now....i want the sequellllll!!!! XDDD You know i'm not a Seung Hyun biased but i loved your story anyway!!! And now i want more..keke...take your time...you did really good with this fic...i'm sure that you'll do great with the next one!!!! ^_^ And btw...my website is finally online when you want to check it!!! http://ftislandworld.com ^_^....i'll be waiting for your new fic!!! fighting!!
SUJU4LIFE
#9
SEQUEL???!!!! YAY!!!! Have I ever mentioned how much I love you and your story? Yes? No? Maybe so? Well, I'll just tell you just in case: I FREAKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY! YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I'VE READ FROM! I LOVE YOU!! Ah-hem, I've finished fangirling.<br />
Can't wait for the sequel! And we get stories for the other members! Yay! You do not know just how happy that makes me! I need to go subscribe to you before I forget!<br />
Sadly, I go back to school on Tuesday and I will no longer have the time to read and enjoy fanfics, or life! T^T I will however somehow, someway, make time to read your fic when it's out! You can count on that! And I can't wait to read the other fic too!<br />
So, I guess I'll see you at the sequel chingu! Annyeong! *sniffle* I told myself I wasn't gonna cry! I'll miss you!! T^T, lolz :)<br />
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PS.: You don't lack in 'technique', whatever that is :P
ssweetdreamer101 #10
congradulations <3 well don't can't wait for more stories :)