Chapter 22

What Happens in Seoul
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~Third Person POV~

 

"I know something we should try," Hongki said as he began rummaging through his bag looking for something. He pulled out a small square pad of paper.

 

Natalie looked like she was about to ask him something, so he held up his finger. "Just watch."

 

He took a piece of paper off of the pad and carefully folded it into a cute little paper airplane. With a smile, he held it up and showed it to her. He grabbed her hand and pulled her over near the edge of the cliff excitedly. He tossed the paper airplane over the edge, and they both watched in delight as it floated away, being carried along by the breeze until it was too far away for them to see any more.

 

Right away, both of them rushed back to the pad of paper, folding paper airplanes and laughing like they were kids again as they tossed them of the cliff.

 

"We're so weird," Natalie laughed in enjoyment as they watched their last batch of miniature aircrafts fly away.

 

"Heh, yeah," Hongki smiled, then looked at her for a moment. "Tell me something... Yesterday...with...that kiss..." he paused for a moment and tried to keep his train of thought as Natalie blushed, looking away shyly. "...Don't tell me that was your first?"

 

Natalie looked at him in surprise, then shook her head, but Hongki wasn't sure if she was being honest or not. He lowered his head until his face was only inches from hers, and scanned her face for any reaction. "I'll be gentle," he whispered. She finally looked him in the eyes, and Hongki kissed her lips, gently pulling her closer to him. She just stood there, but she was too surprised to make him stop. He kissed her neck, biting it softly. She gasped and tried to step backwards, then tripped over something. She closed her eyes as

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sillyhappyperson
#1
this was a really cute story, i was sad reading seunghyun cutting himself,(seunghyun biased) and for the entire time through natalie's relationship with hongki was just going poor seunghyun (i'm a dreadful person to hongki, i don't give him enough love, it's all gone to seunghyun) and i really liked it and now i'll go wander and look at the rest of your stories ^.^ hehe (and if there's a sequel i'm interested in reading, hint hint, wink wink)
lildragonkpopislife #2
Please do a sequel!!! Love your stories.
Silentgirl34
#3
Wow! This story is amazing. I've read some stories about F.T Island and for me this story is ranked 2nd best! Good Luck!in writing more stories. I'll be very excited if there's a sequel.
Hwaiting!
jaceBlue #4
OMG I really really love your story! I hope I also have the same courage as yours to write my story.. Good job there ^^
Anonymous_15 #5
Such a cool and fun story.
NeonDreams
#6
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate all the love and support ♥~ ^^<br />
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@Jang_Deny_Chan: Great job on the website, it looks amazing!
-kohaku
#7
Sequel it's such a cool story :-) ^^
Jang_Deny_Chan #8
DONE!!!! Really nice ending!!!!! ^_^...but now....i want the sequellllll!!!! XDDD You know i'm not a Seung Hyun biased but i loved your story anyway!!! And now i want more..keke...take your time...you did really good with this fic...i'm sure that you'll do great with the next one!!!! ^_^ And btw...my website is finally online when you want to check it!!! http://ftislandworld.com ^_^....i'll be waiting for your new fic!!! fighting!!
SUJU4LIFE
#9
SEQUEL???!!!! YAY!!!! Have I ever mentioned how much I love you and your story? Yes? No? Maybe so? Well, I'll just tell you just in case: I FREAKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY! YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I'VE READ FROM! I LOVE YOU!! Ah-hem, I've finished fangirling.<br />
Can't wait for the sequel! And we get stories for the other members! Yay! You do not know just how happy that makes me! I need to go subscribe to you before I forget!<br />
Sadly, I go back to school on Tuesday and I will no longer have the time to read and enjoy fanfics, or life! T^T I will however somehow, someway, make time to read your fic when it's out! You can count on that! And I can't wait to read the other fic too!<br />
So, I guess I'll see you at the sequel chingu! Annyeong! *sniffle* I told myself I wasn't gonna cry! I'll miss you!! T^T, lolz :)<br />
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PS.: You don't lack in 'technique', whatever that is :P
ssweetdreamer101 #10
congradulations <3 well don't can't wait for more stories :)