Chapter 18

What Happens in Seoul
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~Third Person POV~

 

Natalie finally pulled away and they were both breathless.

 

"Um, I think I should go now," she said shyly. She stood up and went to leave, but then paused at the door way, picking up something from the ground.

 

"Here, I think you dropped your phone," she said, handing it to Hongki.

 

"Oh, thanks," Hongki replied, snapping out of his trance. But when he looked over at his nightstand, he saw that his phone was already there. He looked at the phone in his hand and realized that it was Seunghyun's.

 

Ottokae?, he thought to himself in panic. "Natalie, wait!" he called out. He couldn't have her go out there if Seunghyun was still home. His scheme would be ruined.

 

"What is it, Hongki oppa?" she said, turning back to him.

 

He stared at her for a minute. "Why are you looking at me like that?" she asked uneasily.

 

"You called me oppa," he said with a smile.

 

"Oh…" she simply replied. Why do these guys like being called 'oppa' so much? She thought to herself.

 

"Um…please stay here for a minute. I'll be right back. Do you want something to drink?" he asked.

 

"Oh, alright… And sure, I could use some water actually," she replied. She kind of wanted to leave, but then she figured she didn't really have anywhere to go anyways. She sat back down on his bed as he nodded and rushed out of the room.

 

As Hongki walked out into the hallway, he braced himself for whatever chaos he was about to throw himself into. He paused for

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sillyhappyperson
#1
this was a really cute story, i was sad reading seunghyun cutting himself,(seunghyun biased) and for the entire time through natalie's relationship with hongki was just going poor seunghyun (i'm a dreadful person to hongki, i don't give him enough love, it's all gone to seunghyun) and i really liked it and now i'll go wander and look at the rest of your stories ^.^ hehe (and if there's a sequel i'm interested in reading, hint hint, wink wink)
lildragonkpopislife #2
Please do a sequel!!! Love your stories.
Silentgirl34
#3
Wow! This story is amazing. I've read some stories about F.T Island and for me this story is ranked 2nd best! Good Luck!in writing more stories. I'll be very excited if there's a sequel.
Hwaiting!
jaceBlue #4
OMG I really really love your story! I hope I also have the same courage as yours to write my story.. Good job there ^^
Anonymous_15 #5
Such a cool and fun story.
NeonDreams
#6
Thanks everyone! I really appreciate all the love and support ♥~ ^^<br />
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@Jang_Deny_Chan: Great job on the website, it looks amazing!
-kohaku
#7
Sequel it's such a cool story :-) ^^
Jang_Deny_Chan #8
DONE!!!! Really nice ending!!!!! ^_^...but now....i want the sequellllll!!!! XDDD You know i'm not a Seung Hyun biased but i loved your story anyway!!! And now i want more..keke...take your time...you did really good with this fic...i'm sure that you'll do great with the next one!!!! ^_^ And btw...my website is finally online when you want to check it!!! http://ftislandworld.com ^_^....i'll be waiting for your new fic!!! fighting!!
SUJU4LIFE
#9
SEQUEL???!!!! YAY!!!! Have I ever mentioned how much I love you and your story? Yes? No? Maybe so? Well, I'll just tell you just in case: I FREAKING LOVE YOU AND YOUR STORY! YOU ARE ONE OF THE BEST WRITERS I'VE READ FROM! I LOVE YOU!! Ah-hem, I've finished fangirling.<br />
Can't wait for the sequel! And we get stories for the other members! Yay! You do not know just how happy that makes me! I need to go subscribe to you before I forget!<br />
Sadly, I go back to school on Tuesday and I will no longer have the time to read and enjoy fanfics, or life! T^T I will however somehow, someway, make time to read your fic when it's out! You can count on that! And I can't wait to read the other fic too!<br />
So, I guess I'll see you at the sequel chingu! Annyeong! *sniffle* I told myself I wasn't gonna cry! I'll miss you!! T^T, lolz :)<br />
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PS.: You don't lack in 'technique', whatever that is :P
ssweetdreamer101 #10
congradulations <3 well don't can't wait for more stories :)