Chapter 104: Thank you so much for the honest review. You pointed out a lot of concerns that I had over the story and I really appreciate you mentioning them (like the point of views, the relationship between Jungkook and Jimin, and other things too) Honestly when I first started writing the story, it all came from a small dream I had and I simply wrote it out. From there ideas started popping in my head and I was making it up as I wrote the story.
I didn't really have much organization or plans for this story so I knew it was super messy. But because I was already a bunch of chapters in I didn't know where to start editing or how. I really needed to get someone to review and help me find a way to improve and edit the story. I found this review super helpful! I've been thinking and planning on rewriting this fic and I really do plan on using this review as a guide to help me with the editing process.
Thank you so much! I'll credit you right away!
Chapter 100: Sorry for the late pick up. Honestly I expected a low score ;; I even dreamt I'll get a 0 for this fanfic XD The reason I ask for a review on this is because I've edited this fanfic a lot of time and even I think it's not really satisfying in any way. It's not angsty enough and the flow, right is really all over the place. But I don't know how to fix it. But actually if not angst I really don't know what genre to tag it. I wrote this at that time where I really have the need to write something to be productive. And even though I don't know what to write I still force myself to think of something. So when I came up with an idea that I know very well I tried to make it in a story. But as I write this I realized that to make it in a story I should add other things even though I'm not really familiar with those. Especially being in a dorm since I've never been to a dorm in college. And a lot of other stuff. I also had a hard time of picking the main protagonist in the story. I am more familiar with BTS members so I use one of them. As for the plot it is basically that self harm. And I used the title Better because doing that really makes Taehyung feel better. When he cuts he feels relieved from his problems and yeah he felt better. I really should edit this again tho. Thanks for the review and telling me these. It really will help me in editing the story again. Picked up and credited :)
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