AUTHOR: Sunflowerpots STORY TITLE: Blue.

Title (08/10): I don’t know how you got that title or what inspired you to pick but doesn’t do this story justice.

Characterization (10/10): Wonwoo’s character is beyond amazing. I was completely blown away how well you managed to develop him so perfectly. The way you tailor and hint him leaves this everlasting impression. I congratulate you upon being able to do that because very few authors can pull this off. You also did an excellent job at keeping the main character separated from the minor characters.

Themes (09/10): I strongly suggest you should warn your readers with an tag. I literally shivered in disgust a bit with the ending of . Some readers can be much more sensitive to the topic if not warned and may take some dramatic actions (it’s happened before).

Setting (09/10):The only problem I have with the setting is the transition between different settings. I found that there was not much of consistency when it comes to the setting. For example when Wonwoo has to do that group therapy you don’t really give any details that he’s going to another room (unless they do group therapy in his room which I highly doubt).

Description and Foreword (08/10): I think that the description that you wrote on the request form is a lot better than the one that’s listed on your story. I would suggest changing it because it would give the story a good boost. Like the title the Description does not do this story justice.

Writing Style / Techniques (10/10): Your writing is stunning. It has this mystical tone that entices the readers closer to the story. You have been gifted a writing style that can intoxicate readers into addiction and I hope you continue to use this gift well.

Presentation (10/10): Clean and simple. A great contrast to the complexity of the story. I love how your cover really shows the hidden secrets of the story at the same time as not giving it away. Absolutely perfect!

Structure and Flow (10/10): You must really know what you’re doing because the flow is consistent and steady. You transitioned very well and the structure was thought out excellently.

Plot (10/10): It’s rare to find a unique plotline that no one has ever done before. I must applaud you for your creativity and originality.

Overall Enjoyment (10/10): I loved your story and very surprised that there aren’t more readers subscribed.

Overall Score: 94/100
Overall Percentage: 94%
Reviewer's Note: You are the first and only story that has ever earned an almost perfect score from me and I’m a very picky reviewer. I will definitely up vote your story and look forward to future ones.
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