Ch. 29

(Sorry this is taken so long I lost my editor and i lost my will to write. I've also had major writers block for this scene.)

Jb and Jinyoung made it back to Mark house to see that their children were still a live but were all pouting. "Eat children, we made up so you have nothing to worry about." All their faces brighten up and they dug into the food.

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chanbob ^{102 streak} #1 Jan 9, 2018 00:32:29

Chapter 21: Hi there, just an advice to get your story more potential readers, you can delete this message as it doesn't have anything to do with your story and I'm not your reader. I don't mind at all if you delete it, but I'd be happy to help you out!
You should tag your story with "markson", instead of "marksonfanfic", also I suggest the tags that indicate the story's genre, for instance, "romance", and the group they are in, "got7" as well as their individual names ("marktuan", "mark", and "jackson").
Aside from the tags, I'd highly suggest you separate paragraphs using Enter key, not Shift-Enter because the latter function actually counts as continuing the paragraph. hence you can see there is no gap between lines in your paragraphs.
good luck with writing! I hope you get more attention for the story, as you deserve it.
(don't reply to this comment if you want to delete it later! )