Party

Pretending Not To Love
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No One’s POV:

 

After Joo Eun and Mijin walked out of the house, Sooyoon slowly walked backed to her room and flopped himself down on her bed. He shook his head rapidly as he was still left in a daze after what he had witnessed, a little earlier.

 

When Joo Eun and Mijin had to halt in a café for someone else, Joo Eun suddenly remembered that she had locked her brother inside his room and also she has to help Sooyoon get out of her house which would be otherwise not possible.

 

She excused herself stating some reasons and agreed to meet Mijin back there in another 30 minutes before she rushed back home. She straightaway went to her room, to find Sooyoon spread out on her bed.

 

“Yah!” she shut the door behind her. “What if my brother decides to come to my room?” she shrieked.

 

He rolled around and looked in her direction but avoided looking at her. He felt that the dress was a bit too much even from the sideways glance. But he also felt that he doesn’t really have any rights to object her wearing it.

 

It was his first time too seeing her in a dress like this. The dress changed the innocent look of hers into a y one. For some odd reasons, he didn’t want any other guys to see her like that.

 

“Are you going to the party alone?” Sooyoon asked, a little worriedly while she nodded her head.

 

The two of them were still awkward around each other and whenever his eyes fell on her, she remembered the earlier incident and she wiggled uncomfortably. The dress wasn’t helping her either. She tried pulling down the ends of it but she only ended up getting it shorter than the previous time.

 

“Come on, I will get you out of this house.” Her face was still flushed.

 

“Okay, but I will wait outside for you. I will accompany you until wherever you have to go.”

 

She nodded her head and led him out, after making sure her brother was still in his room. “Give me a minute. I will be back,” she went back to her house and knocked on her brother’s door.

 

“Oppa?” she knocked again. “James, my friend has left.” She called and the door opened, a second later. “I’m sorry that it took longer than I thought.” She whispered while he observed her from head to toe.

 

“Where are you going wearing that?”

 

“Going out to a party with my friend.” She replied, looking at him wide-eyed.

 

It was almost the first time he had questioned her about her plans and she was kind of happy inside. “Wearing that?” he raised his eyebrows at her while she looked down at her dress and nodded her head hesitatingly.

 

“Okay, but make sure you get home early and most importantly safe.” He said, taking her aback. She stood there frozen, just staring at him. “Did you hear what I said?” she snapped out and nodded her head. “I will not be back until the next weekend. So leave me a message when you get back home.”

 

“Okay, James. I will,” she replied in a trance and walked out of there.

 

 

 

“Are you alright?” Sooyoon asked as he waved his hands in front of her.

 

“My brother spoke to me,” she replied happily while he raised one of his eyebrows. “It looked like he was worried about me. Not many words. But he cares,” she jumped and hugged his arms.

 

Joo Eun’s actions and everything else were more girly than her usual self. She blushed so much that he started to wonder whether that was her actual skin color.

 

“Are you really going to go to the party in that dress?” he asked worriedly, wrapping his arms around her while glaring at a few passerby guys who were ogling her from head to toe.

 

‘Aish! Why’s everyone so bothered about me wearing a dress?’ she mumbled to herself while she just replied a ‘yes’ to him.

 

He let out a sigh, knowing well enough he couldn’t do anything about it. “If you are going to return after it gets dark, then call me. I will bring you back home.” He sounded worried.

 

“Okay, I will. But don’t you worry. I will be alright.” She embraced him to calm him down. “I will go alone from here. Mijin unnie will be waiting in that café. I don’t want to take the risk of them seeing you.” She pointed to the café which was a few blocks away.

 

“I will wait here. You go and text me if she’s still there.” He waved and sent her away while still keeping an eye on her. He was still worried of the looks she was receiving her entire way to the café.

 

A few seconds after she disappeared into the café, he received a message stating that Mijin was inside and he left towards his home after sending her a reply.

 

 

 

Joo Eun’s POV:

 

I walked into the café and saw Mijin along with a few others. As soon as I saw the group of people, I was starting to get nervous from all the eyes I was receiving and wished Sooyoon was here with me.

 

I did my best to stick to Mijin’s side until we all reached the party pl

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Guys, it's been nearly a month since my last note and I still haven't made an update. I'm really sorry about that. I had my surgery just last week and in recovery now. So I couldn't really sit and work on the next chapter yet. Hope you all can understand. I'm extremely sorry about the delay.

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fayrenz #1
Chapter 47: i teared up at the end ♡ i liked how this chapter had such positive progress, and there was no unnecessary drama from Sooyoon's parents, I always love to see such supportive family members, it really warms my heart ;;; and how Sooyoon proposed was really ♡ and Mijin being pregnant & Jiwoong haha, they really are so cute together! There's so much else, all the big and lil things, that I can't properly or possibly mention but have to say that this chapter was fulfilling to say the least! Although, I really hoped to see a bit more on James, like if not a full-fledged part about him but a little tidbit about how he'd going on about his life from here onwards... even Moon! I know that it could be kinda obvious and I also agree it is good enough to be left to the reader's imagination but what to do they are my faves here :P This is certainly not a complaint but just me pining about those two cuties lol



Anyways... moving on to our star couple... they really are precious! What really got me was the change in Joo Eun's nature/behavior... like a couple of chapters (?) back, she was really emotional and her thoughts and worries were so self-restrained, I really liked how the enlistment and the overall progression of their relationship from that previous point to here have brought her out of her self-restrained behavior, as in, although she was angry when Sooyoon was hugged by Hye Jin, but she didn't linger on it by thinking of Sooyoon's situation, part and fault in it. It was so subtly implied, I really liked how you just left that change flow into the plot itself instead of explaining it :3 Also, though all those parts about Sooyoon wanting to "escape" after the proposal, so funny xD But even in the jokes it's so apparent how much he loves Joo Eun, and how patient and understanding he is (actually both are of each other's competencies & flaws). They certainly match together so well, and what's the best part about it is that it wasn't this perfect when their relationship started out. You've shown them grow, commit mistakes and then learn from them and then become stronger, better for each other ♡



This really was such an amazing story! I understand how hard it is to be so invested in a story and the amount of effort that goes into making every chapter happen! I am really grateful that you put in such efforts and didn't give up on it despite of everything! I thoroughly enjoyed it-- each and every word ♡ Tysm for this beautiful story!!!!! and I look forward to the new stories you might have in your mind for us ♡♡♡
fayrenz #2
Chapter 46: Aw I am happy to see that they aren't apart for the entire of Sooyoon's time in the army. These meet ups are really important for their relationship and for themselves individually, I could feel how both of them were so anxious of being apart and meeting even for a bit reassured them so much. This chapter was really precious, from Joo Eun's friends and James coming over, Mijin and Jiwoong dating(how cutee) Joo learning how to cook thinking about Sooyoon and finally when they briefly met... It was lovely ❤️
fayrenz #3
Chapter 45: Yay! I am happy that Joo Eun got better. The whole part with Moon and James was so precious. I totally agree with James, no one is worth ruining your own life like this hehe. And the end in which both Joo Eun and Sooyoon are doing their best in their own ways while they wait for each other... awww ♡ Even though you say it was a filler, it was such an important chapter portraying how Joo Eun overcame the absence of Sooyoon and then deciding to proceed and do best with her life too. I enjoyed reading it! Tysm for the update ♡♡♡
fayrenz #4
Chapter 44: Joo Eun acted a bit selfish here, imo. But she's in pain and Moon and James will hopefully guide her and comfort her until Sooyoon is back. It was a nice chapter, cannot wait for more! ❤️❤️❤️
4dcutie20
#5
Chapter 43: TT TT TT TT thyre so cutee.....aww my hrtttt.... thy gotta wait fr 2 yrs..sigh... well its all for good i guess.... thank u for the update unnie ya!!!!!
fayrenz #6
Chapter 43: the bag of presents and the way Sooyoon professed his love ;;; ahh it was so sweet and precious ♡ it was so sad they had to part but I am also so glad that it wasn't on bad terms and they sorted everything out before his enlistment and are going to stay together. They seriously are so cute and even James ♡♡ I am excited for what happens next ^^ ♡
4dcutie20
#7
Chapter 42: kyaaaaaaaaaaa affter a longg timeeee....it feels so guud...awwww thyre united im so happy..grinning ear to ear.....good job unnie...cant wait for part 2!!!!!!
fayrenz #8
Chapter 42: Aww they are finally together! They are really so cute and James being a protective yet supportive brother ❤️ oooh cant wait for the trip ❤️❤️ tysm for the chapter ❤️❤️❤️
fayrenz #9
Chapter 41: oh dear, i really wonder what Sooyoon's reasons are! I hope it's just the enlisting and they get to talk over it and get together! i really crave them to be together and James is so cute he was barely able to hide it from Joo Eun all she needed was to read his voice when she asked him hahaha xx thank you for the update!! looking (patiently) forward to more :3
4dcutie20
#10
Chapter 41: awww did sooyoon rejected her coz he is enlisting???? ahhhh ...im emo...go grl run to meet him nd smack him fr being a stupid and say u willl wait him....sobs*
and........thaankkkks fr the update unnie ya~