Betrayed By My Best Friend

Dark Elements
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Coral squeezed my hand reassuringly and led me to an upper level of the palace than the room I’d been staying in We approached a bubble which guards were stationed at. They saluted us as we entered.

 

Once I’d passed through the bubble, I found that Carol and I had entered into a luxurious hallway inlaid with a deep, red carpet. We followed it a ways, until we heard the faint sound of voices coming from around a corner just up ahead.

 

“We must not let the Shadow Prince or Wind Prince get to her! If they do, it could go any which way! The results could be catastrophic!” a masculine voice floated over to us.

 

“My lord, I have watched over her for some time, and she is stubborn. She may not accept or even come to terms with this as readily as you may like.”

 

I froze. The last one who’d spoken-that voice!

 

“Kame!” I cried launching myself through the water and around the corner. I crashed straight into someone and fell onto the marble tile. I glanced up at the person I had rammed into. That face! I didn’t have time to dwell on it now. I glanced around wildly until I spotted Kame. He wasn’t wearing a shirt and that would’ve definitely caught my attention, except for the fact that he too had a brilliant emerald tail. Dark green-almost black, glistening strong, powerful…dangerous.

 

“K-Kame?” my voice faltered as I assessed the man who had been my best friend. He didn’t come to me; didn't reassure me, didn't even smile at me with his eyes crinkling at the corners like he used to. He just floated there quietly; respectfully keeping his distance from...from what? Was he keeping his distance from me of all people...or...

 

A strong pair of arms hoisted me up from behind, standing me upright.

 

“I’m glad to see you are well, my lady,” Kame bowed, his green tail flashing like jewels as he moved.

 

“My lady? What’s with that?” I asked; disbelief coloring my tone, “Kame, it’s me! You’d never talk to me like that! Don’t mess around! Do you know how worried sick I was about you? And you’ve been holding out on me about being a flipping mer--water demon the whole time!?”

 

A cleared throat from the guy behind me…holdin

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Italia17
#1
Chapter 31: Oh. My. GOODNESS!!!!!!!!! Dongsang you are my favorite author ever! You had me crying, laughing, squealing, yelling, so many emotions! And every time you introduce a new prince I start out hating them and thn falling in love with them! Oh dongsang you are incredible! And this story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No joke! I couldn't stop reading it!!!!
AnaSayer
#2
I love it! This is definitely my favorite story! But how could you leave everyone on edge like that! Please keep writing this one. I love the different Demons. I can't choose which one I like the best! Keep up the fantastic work. And by the way, you are an amazing writer. ;)
leelee78982 #3
Chapter 30: it's cool to see show have more depth to his character. it's hard sometimes to connect to a 1 dimensional character. And the ending with Kame, nice! keeps us interested in reading the next chapter. good job unnie!
leelee78982 #4
Chapter 28: mariah it was so funny.... when i started to reread this i forgot that onew died and you jus see me freeze and look at the screen and a tear saying, "kfc is out of business.... onew!"....
still love the story though
leelee78982 #5
hey mariah wat was the youtube vid? its been removed.... :( n by chance miss AMAZING WRITER(seriously!), is ther a chance for a very mischevious and dark taemin? :/ hehe jus wondering... luv ur stories girl! ur gifted!
FHB_97 #6
this is the first time i read a story that has both my favorite kpop and jpop idol's !!!
n it's amazing !!
plz update soon :]
luvjpop
#7
@MaiMai36: Thanks! I will do my best. Sorry I haven't updated much... I have been super busy. :P But I will keep trying. Thanks for your patience!
MaiMai36
#8
Love how this story is turning out!! Update soon please^_^
MaiMai36
#9
Came upon this story by chance. I am soo glad I gave it a chance ur writin is amazing!!! More original than other fics on here^^