Just Go With It

Dark Elements
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I was wrapped up in a merman’s tail.

2.   Afore mentioned merman was taking me somewhere.

3.   I could now breathe underwater (since when could I do that!?)

4.   I was obviously crazy.

 

So it was with great relief when I out.

 

The first thing I was aware of was the pain exploding in my aching chest. It hurt to breathe! I in breath after ragged breath. I choked and immediately there was a soft hand massaging  the back of my neck. When my coughing fit subsided, I felt a little bit better. I glanced over to see who had been so kind as to help me and was surprised to see a young girl-maybe 12-13 yrs. old. She smiled shyly at me.

 

“Thanks,” was all I could manage.

 

“It’s nothing,” the girl blushed.

 

I took in my surroundings. I was in a beautiful, white room. Cream curtains and netting hung around a soft circular bed I was sitting in. The emerald and ruby-red pillows were downy and the grey-blue covers were light, fluid, and warm. Drawers and a closet with a full-length mirror decorated one side of the room. The other side where a wall should be, was a window shaped like a dome-or part of a gigantic bubble. It reminded me of the Gungun City from Star Wars.

 

What I saw outside the window made me catch my breath. Outside was not just the ocean, but an underwater city! Greens, blues, pinks, reds, blacks, whites-so many colors, so many buildings (or what can only be described as buildings). Schools of fish swam lazily by, and merpeople swimming everywhere! Frantically I turned back to the young girl.

 

“Where am I?” I asked my voice unusually high, “What’s going on?”

 

The girl held out her hands in a calming gesture. I took a few deep breaths before she answered, “My name is Coral,” she smiled; I didn’t smile back.

 

“We’re at Atlantis and you almost drowned, and were saved by our prince and will soon be our princess!” she gushed.

 

There were many things I could’ve said to all that, but the one thing I found myself saying, was, “Why don’t you have a tail?”

 

Coral grinned as she explained, “Water Demons can morph int

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Italia17
#1
Chapter 31: Oh. My. GOODNESS!!!!!!!!! Dongsang you are my favorite author ever! You had me crying, laughing, squealing, yelling, so many emotions! And every time you introduce a new prince I start out hating them and thn falling in love with them! Oh dongsang you are incredible! And this story is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! No joke! I couldn't stop reading it!!!!
AnaSayer
#2
I love it! This is definitely my favorite story! But how could you leave everyone on edge like that! Please keep writing this one. I love the different Demons. I can't choose which one I like the best! Keep up the fantastic work. And by the way, you are an amazing writer. ;)
leelee78982 #3
Chapter 30: it's cool to see show have more depth to his character. it's hard sometimes to connect to a 1 dimensional character. And the ending with Kame, nice! keeps us interested in reading the next chapter. good job unnie!
leelee78982 #4
Chapter 28: mariah it was so funny.... when i started to reread this i forgot that onew died and you jus see me freeze and look at the screen and a tear saying, "kfc is out of business.... onew!"....
still love the story though
leelee78982 #5
hey mariah wat was the youtube vid? its been removed.... :( n by chance miss AMAZING WRITER(seriously!), is ther a chance for a very mischevious and dark taemin? :/ hehe jus wondering... luv ur stories girl! ur gifted!
FHB_97 #6
this is the first time i read a story that has both my favorite kpop and jpop idol's !!!
n it's amazing !!
plz update soon :]
luvjpop
#7
@MaiMai36: Thanks! I will do my best. Sorry I haven't updated much... I have been super busy. :P But I will keep trying. Thanks for your patience!
MaiMai36
#8
Love how this story is turning out!! Update soon please^_^
MaiMai36
#9
Came upon this story by chance. I am soo glad I gave it a chance ur writin is amazing!!! More original than other fics on here^^