Mokpo

48 hours

reference: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MyxSkbEnPr0

I've decided to add some references again. Gotto update the other chapters though.

Thank you for reading :)

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During one of the episodes of “Hello Baby” we visited the “kid’s land”, an indoor playground on the top-floor of a mall. We were awkward at first, Jonghyun seriously bored and I hated to be filmed while making a total fool of myself. I think we tried too hard to entertain Yoogeun as a group. Then Minho came up with the animal-costumes which worked better for us than for the kid. But finally we got around to entertaining Yoogeun as well, especially with the bobby-car race that mischievous Jjong won bribing and conning.  

Now it’s time to dress up for Yoogeun’s sake again although this time not as animals.

We spend the evening trying to busy ourselves with cleaning up the dorm. There’s nothing else to do while waiting for details concerning the delivery. We all feel uneasy but Minho is seriously worried. I’ve never seen him like that before. He keeps wondering if we’re doing the right thing and although he doesn’t try to change the plan he obviously isn’t all in either.

Taemin goes with the flow like he always does in our joint activities. I don’t think he is shallow, it’s like he’s dancing through life and is led by the music that SHINee plays. Among us he is the most relaxed and relies on us to make the right decisions.

Jjong is almost cheerful which is equally unapt and refreshing. It unnerves Minho but calms me. I think he is looking forward to see Kibum. Although JongKey is a myth the two of them indeed have a special connection. They like each other a lot and there is a deep understanding between them.

At 10:00pm sharp another message from the kidnappers arrives, this time on Minho’s phone. It’s like they’re trying to unsettle us by taking turns and I wonder if we missed anything vital that might have been sent to Taemin’s lost phone.

It’s a video-clip accompanied by a text.

The clip shows the same room again. This time it’s dark except for a small bedside lamp. Yoogeun is sleeping on a mattress on the floor and a gloved hand holds a bottle of sleeping pills into the camera. Minho turns pale while we’re watching.

The text says:

10:00PM TOMORROW NIGHT AT SAMHAKDO-DOCKS AT MOKPO JEOLLANAM-DO. NO POLICE!

“And where the is Mokpo?” Jjong asks after we have re-watched the clip and taken down notes.

Taemin opens Google earth.

“They can’t be serious”, Minho says, “how are we supposed to get there in time?”

The place is all the way down the map, south of Gwangjou. There are flights going out from Gimpo to Gwangjou-airport but none of them in time. We could go by railway then it’s about 6 hours but the online-schedule shows delays and cancellations due to the weather.

“Well, we’ll have to drive down there”, I suggest, “it’s a long way but we still have enough time. We already got the car, the money, the clothes ...”

“We haven’t got Kibum yet”, Jjong interrupts. “If he’s late we’re in trouble.”

“True”, I agree, “but we still should figure out how to get there by car and make alternative plans, shouldn’t we?”

Jjong nods slightly embarrassed. Sometimes I actually have the necessary leader-authority, but it always makes me feel awkward.

Although the message itself is disturbing it gives us something to do. We work on the most favorable routes while keeping an eye on the train-schedule and the weather-report. The latter doesn’t look good. It started to snow around 09:00pm and hasn’t stopped yet. Reports say it might be snowing all night and that they even expect one of the heaviest snow-falls of the decade.

And as if this isn’t bad enough, Kibum calls Jjong around 2:00am:

“ the snow”, he says, “I’m stuck again.”

He’s in Tokyo now but Narita has cancelled all outgoing flights. JJong was lucky to get out of Japan in time. They’re shutting down airports one after the other.

Even Taemin is worried now. We’re running out of time.

“Any plan?” Jjong asks, “Can you go somewhere else?”

“I’ll take the train to Osaka and hopefully I’m faster than the snow. Then I might arrive at Incheon airport in the afternoon or early evening.”

“That won’t do”, Minho grabs the phone, “the rendezvous isn’t in Seoul or anywhere near. We got to go down South to some place called Mokpo. We haven’t even found out yet how to get there in time if we start early in the morning.”

There’s a moment’s silence at the end of the line. Then Kibum says:

“I’ll figure something out.”

“Like what?” Minho asks but Kibum already hung up. Minho is flustered and annoyed. Actually it’s only Jjong who doesn’t look more worried than before. I’m impressed by his faith in Kibum’s problem solving abilities. But then again if not Kibum who else is supposed to save the day?

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')