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Hall 17 appears huge even from the outside. The big roll-gate is down. We pause for a moment in front of it.

“Should we just open it?” I ask, feeling vulnerable.

“Let’s stand aside while opening it, just in case they’re trying to attack us,” Minho suggests.

Kibum returns: “Attack us? Like how? Do you expect them to be using guns or something?”

“Well, I have no idea who we’re dealing with here. So we should be as careful as possible, don’t you think.”

We look at each other once again, as if it might be the last time.

There is tall Minho, tough in spite of his concussion and trying not to lean too much on Taemin. Taem is his usual pretty self but his expression is determined and his tousled blond hair gives him an almost daredevil look.

Jjongie on the other hand makes me worry. His condition is alarming and I really don’t like to involve him in whatever is waiting for us behind the gate. He looks as if he couldn’t even stand without Kibum holding him up and tries not to put any weight on his injured foot.  

And Kibum ... if he wasn’t Kibum he’d look downright ridiculous right now in the girly overcoat, the paisly shorts with leggings that he has been wearing since we picked him up at Incheon airport and the unspeakable uggs. But his face is fierce, almost demonic so much so that I’m glad he’s on OUR side.

And I’m taking too long for his patience so he just shifts Jonghyun over to my shoulder grabs the bottom of the gate and swings it open powerfully making it roll up all the way.

The depot hall is dimly lit but it’s indeed the room we saw in the last video. There are lots of big crates piled up in rows. I’m painfully aware that we’re in the disadvantage. Whoever is lurking in the dark already knows we’re here and is probably watching us.

Usually Jjong is the one who gets frustrated first but Kibum’s patience has worn so thin that he doesn’t even care about his own health anymore. He’s in one foul mood, stomping down the corridor between the piles and shouting:

“We’re here, now hand over Yoogeun, take the ing money and leave us alone.”

Jjong weakly says:

“Tune it down, Bummie, we shouldn’t make them angry.”

“I AM angry already. I’m sick and tired of this . My best friends, pretty much the closest thing to family I have, are hurt and could have died tonight in a freaking car-crash. I’ve travelled here from ing New York City via L.A. and Tokyo and what not and don’t even know what day we have anymore. I’m tired to the bone, hungry and hurt and I’m wearing UGGS for Christ’s sake. I’ve really had it now.” His eyes almost throw sparks.

Before Jjong can reply a crate crashes down from a high pile in front of us and breaks open. There’s a curled up body in it and for a second I believe it’s Yoogeun but then I notice the skirt of a school uniform. It’s a girl.

Taemin hastily gets down letting Minho stand on his own and pulls the teenager out of the remains. She is tied up and gagged with duct-tape but alive and conscious.

“What’s going on here”, Minho asks nobody in particular while Taemin carefully frees the crying girl from the restraints. Kibum is still fuming but he waits to hear what she has to say.

She immediately begins to apologize when Taemin removes the tape.

“I’m so sorry, I didn’t mean to hurt anyone, I ... it was ... I didn’t ... “

“Calm down”, Taemin says with his best soothing smile. The girl grabs his arm and says:

“I was just baby-sitting Yoogeun and it was just a joke at first. We were playing around after watching a movie. I tied him to the chair and made a vine of it. And just for fun I sent it to a friend. It was really just a game, but they suggested we’d take it further. I know it was wrong, I’m so sorry, I just ... I only agreed to help because I wanted to meet you ... so badly. I didn’t mean ... I really love Yoogeun ...”

She breaks off when suddenly there is the noise of speakers switched on and the acoustic feedback of a misused microphone makes us cringe and then someone shouts into the intro of “Clue and Note”:

“SHINee’s back!” and laughs like a lunatic.

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')