Fishy ...

48 hours

I know the chapters are short. But I think I can keep this up better when I write in short episodes, well I hope at least.

When I started the story I didn't know that Fishy is originally from Mokpo, so when I found out coincidentally I thought I should give him a cameo ^^. I hope you like it.

Thanks for reading, commenting and suggesting things :). I promise I'll reveal how Kibum excused himself to get away from NYC later on.

Reference: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FqjH9eoO4uw

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I think up to this point, before the last call, I still didn’t really believe those people were capable of hurting Yoogeun. In spite of all the evidence I had kept my faith in the kidnapper’s goodwill and reason. I pictured a bunch of fan-girls who definitely went over the top yet didn’t really mean any harm. But now this has changed. It almost feels as if they hurt us, too, as if they were directly responsible for the accident.

Jjong looks like he is thinking the same thing and I know this isn’t good. We can’t lose our cool. I should try to calm down to be able to hold back Jjong when he blows his lid.

“We’ll be on the train for another two hours at least”, Minho says into the silence and I can see that he is already trying to ease the anger that makes me tremble and Jonghyun clench his teeth. “We should treat Jjongie Hyung’s ankle and maybe get some sleep.”

Taemin immediately seizes the suggestion and adds “Maybe we can get something to eat too. There should be a restaurant in one of the carriages.”

“Okay,” Kibum says, “you and Jinki-Hyung go and get something to eat. Minho and I will play doctor on Jjongie.”

With that he pulls out his wallet but Taemin dismisses it and shows him his own wallet, the one Kibum gave him for his birthday, with a big Taeminnie-smile.

“I can’t believe you haven’t lost it yet”, Kibum says dryly but looks almost touched and probably is.

Taemin and I move to the next carriage in search for the train-restaurant. Among the few people we pass is a teenage girl who is the first person so far who definitely knows who we are. Her eyes go wide when Taemin almost stumbles because the train unexpectedly jerks to the right and he unconsciously makes a couple of magic steps without breaking his stride.

She is about to take a picture and usually I wouldn’t care, but this might be a bad moment and I really don’t want any fans waiting for us in Mokpo and make things even more difficult than they already are.

So I smile my best smile and put a finger to my lips. She stops in mid-motion and then takes the phone down with a slight nod and a shy smile.

I almost want to hug her for understanding and forgoing the opportunity to catch SHINee’s Taemin and Onew off-guard.

The restaurant is closed already, but there is a small newspaper-booth that sells crisps and sweets. We get a bunch of packages of everything and when we pass the girl again on our way back, I hand her a small bag of crisps. She looks up only for a second and takes it with a whispered “Gam-sa hamnida, Onew-oppa”.

Taemin doesn’t notice any of it and that’s probably for the best.

Meanwhile Kibum has managed a decent looking bandage around Jjong’s ankle. I’m surprised that I actually thought of taking the first-aid kit from the car with us. So I’m not entirely useless. And Jjongie seems calmer than before which is probably due to Minho’s good influence.

Critics often write that we’re successful because we’re a well balanced team. I guess they’re right.

We share the junk-food, Kibum whining about the sugar “I can immediately feel my body gaining weight” and Jjong fighting with Minho over the crab-flavoured crisps of which there is only one bag.

Then we try to get some sleep.

It’s Kibum who wakes us 20 minutes before we arrive in Mokpo. It’s 9pm already, just an hour left till rendezvous.

We get off the train unhindered. I check the kidnapper’s messages again for the actual meeting point.

“SAMHAKDO-DOCKS“ I read out loud, “should we take a taxi?”

“Well, I don’t think we have any other options”, Jjong says, limping next to me. He appears to be in more pain than he admits. When we got ready to disembark he was almost unable to fit his foot back into the boot.

Taemin is holding up Minho who is very pale but the band-aid over his eyebrow still holds. He has probably suffered a mild concussion, actually I might as well.

When we try to leave the hall of the train-station we hastily go back in. It’s raining again, freezing rain, sleet as they call it; immediately turning everything into gleaming ice. It’s much worse than what hit us on the highway and a wind gets up. The plaza in front of the station is empty. Not a single soul on the street and not a single taxi.

“Damn”, Kibum swears, “I can’t believe this. All odds against SHINee. Seriously, what’s going on here?”

He takes a careful step outside, shuffling like an old man but still not making it very far before he slips and goes down flailing his arms and cursing.

While he tries to get back to his feet suddenly a man comes striding almost casually around the corner, the ice crunching under his spiked shoes. He stops short of Kibum, and when he bows down to help him in the lights of the station plaza I can see that his hair is dyed blue.

Almost comically he puts Kibum back on his feet, pats down his ridiculous overcoat, looks at him closely and says: “Onew?”

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')