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I sincerely want to thank you all once again for reading and commenting. Your comments gave me ideas and I've heard your pleas ^^. I'm not telling too much though. I apologize for the short chapter, I wish I had just added this part to the chapter before. But well, this is what happens when you're writing in episodes.

Anyway, the development from now on is partly thanks to you guys although maybe not quite what you expected. Thank you!

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As glad as I am to have Yoogeun out of immediate danger and hopefully Jjong and Minho safe, as worried am I about Taemin and especially Kibum who is obviously center of interest of the girl named Haegi.

“Look ...”, I say aloud, "... we should try to ...”

She fires a shot into the floor right before my feet making the concrete sputter up and about. I jump back startled. But she’s already pointing the gun at Kibum again.

“Don’t even think about it”, she says without looking at me, “and don’t think I can’t handle a gun. My father has taught me everything about firearms that’s worth knowing.”

She laughs again. But this time it sounds bitter, almost sad.

Out of the corner of my eyes I see Taemin making a move. He tries to exit Haegi’s field of vision to get around to her back. But she’s not having it. She fires another warning shot short of Taemin’s feet into the floor proving that she indeed is an excellent shooter.

“So what do you want?” Kibum asks. He is almost too calm. As if saving Yoogeun was his only objective and now that it’s done he doesn’t really care what’s happening anymore, or does he?

She hesitates. Maybe she didn’t think that far.

“You said I’m your bias. So this is among you and me”, he continues with his late night husky voice that unsettles women by the dozen. “You have me at gun point. So what are you gonna do with me?”

No, I think desperately, no, Kibum, don’t do this. Please don’t make us leave. Don’t stay with her on your own.

“You two”, she says, “Leader, Maknae. I don’t need you anymore. Go!”

“NO!”, Taemin and I shout in unison and I reach out to Kibum, to pull him away from her when I hear another shot ...

I slam into a pile of crates. Kibum yells “STOP IT” and then Taemin is beside me before I know it and grabs me. It takes me a second to realize that I have been hit.

“STOP IT”, I hear Kibum again, “stop hurting them. You got what you wanted. Leave them out of this.”

Taemin is laying me down, kneeling next to me. His face is anxious, a Taeminnie face, he looks like a child again. I have to smile and reach out to touch his hair and tell him it’s alright. But my shoulder, oh , I never knew a shot would hurt that much.

The last thing I see before the room turns upside down and I lose consciousness is Kibum looking back at me over his shoulder, an expression of guilt and shame on his face that breaks my heart.

“Taem, get him outta here.”

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')