tons of problems

48 hours

I'm in a flow right now, therefore another chapter already. Hope you still enjoy and thanks for your comments, they're much appreciated! :)

----------

All of us immediately start to frantically reach around in search for Kibum. Minho squeezes the airbag in front of him to deflate it enough to move more freely and I help him to unbuckle his seatbelt.

We try not to rock the car too much while searching, in fear of again toppling over since it doesn’t seem stable in its present position.

Kibum is not there.

“He must have been flung out through the windscreen”, Jjong says with a desperate undertone but Minho dismisses it:

“No he wasn’t. He was still beside me when we crashed through the guard-rail. And he was buckled up anyway.”

“Then where is he?”

Jjong creeps into the front and snakes through the remains of the windscreen. The safety-glass pane has shattered into thousands of pebbled shards. Taemin follows him.

I squirm into the front of the car and try to pull Minho out of his position. His legs are still trapped under the steering wheel. Wrapping my arms around his chest I notice that there is a gash on his forehead right at his left brow that is bleeding profusely. I don’t know much about first-aid but I’m pretty sure we need to stop this.

I hear Jjong cursing outside and then both him and Taemin shouting Kibum’s name.

Finally Minho slides out of the seat. I wonder if it is wise to stay in the car since it might once again turn over, but pulling Minho into the snow and the rain outside doesn’t seem a good idea either.

While propping him up I notice that he’s about to lose consciousness again. I just dearly hope he isn’t injured internally.

“Minho”, I call him, “try to stay awake. I’ll just go and get the first aid kit from the trunk.”

With this I also squeeze outside.

There is still a lot of snow. We’re out in a field or something that lies below the highway. There is no traffic at all, probably because the rain has turned the blacktop into an ice-sheet. From where I am I can see the top of the truck far back. We obviously slid quite a distance before breaking through the rail. I wonder if the truck-driver is still in there and what happened to him. But I have to admit that right now I only care about the guys.

Because of the snow it’s light enough that I can see Jonghyun and Taemin moving around shouting and looking for Kibum. Jjong is limping considerably while Taemin seems unhurt.

I don’t see anybody else.

Right, I should look for the first-aid kit in the trunk. Moving to the back of the car I realize that we have been incredibly lucky. The frame is pretty solid and apart from the shattered windscreen the damage appears to be only superficial.

When I try to fumble open the trunk-lid someone behind me says:

“We might as well topple the ing car back on its wheels.”

“Kibum!” I shout out startled.

He drops the big bag with the clothes next to me that we had prepared for the rendezvous with the kidnappers. The kidnappers ... I completely forgot about that and wonder how much time we’ve already lost. I feel my knees buckle when everything at once comes back to me and the situation becomes overwhelming.

“Whoawhoa, Hyung”, Kibum says, grabbing me around the waist. Then he shouts over to Jjong and Taemin:

“I’m here.”

Taemin comes dashing back. I believe I’ve never seen him so relieved before. He jump-hugs both Kibum and me and we all land in the snow. Jjong arrives late still limping and just throws himself onto the heap smiling like an idiot.

“What about Minho?” Kibum asks when we finally get up again.

“He’s still in the car”, I tell him. “He hurt his head. I was trying to get the first aid kit from the trunk.”

We manage to wrestle open the trunk, Jjong and Taemin making sure the car doesn’t topple over again while Kibum and I wedge the lid open. There’s a first aid kit alright and even a blanket. The rain has ceased but it’s still freaking cold.

I take everything we need and rush back to check on Minho. Taemin slips into the car next to me.

Minho is still conscious.

“You found him?” he asks weakly while I try to disinfect the gash on his forehead.

“He found ME”, I say and start to wonder where Kibum had gone in the first place and why.

I hear Jjong asking the same thing outside.

“Where did you go? And why did you just leave everybody behind? Weren’t you worried at all?”

“I got the bag”, Kibum answers.

“Who cares about a ing bag?” Jjong shouts agitated. “We could have died here.”

“I thought it was Taemin.”

“What?” Taemin asks sticking his head through the broken windshield.

Kibum crouches down.

“Hey Minho”, he says smiling and grabs his hand, “you alright?”

Minho sticks out his tongue but then smiles too.

“Yeah”, he says, “I’ll be alright.”

Turning to Taemin Kibum says:

“The fricking bag flew past me through the windscreen while we were making somersaults and I thought it was your curled up scrawny self. So first thing when we finally stopped was finding out if Minho had unexpectedly become our Maknae.”

Taemin looks touched and can’t hide a smile.

“And when I found the bag I made a call to report the accident, but nothing going there. I guess there are hundreds of accidents right now because of the ice-rain.”

“Did you check on the truck-driver?” I ask.

He gives me a weird look and slowly says:

“No ... I kinda cared more about you guys, that’s why I came back.”

Jjong pushes Kibum into the car-wreck and comes after him. We huddle together, still not quite grasping the whole situation but incredibly relieved that we’re all alive.

“Okay”, Jjong finally says, “we’re alive, that’s great. But we got a ton of problems right now.” He checks his watch: “We’ve lost an hour, we have no vehicle and Minho should probably see a doctor...”

“Jinki-Hyung too”, Taemin interrupts, “and you. You can’t even walk properly.”

“Whatever”, Jjong goes on, “we need to get the police here and we should immediately check on the truck-driver, he might be in trouble. But all of this will take hours and we don’t have that time.”

“The car might still be working”, Kibum says, “and we can probably push it back on its wheels now that it’s already on its side.”

“Are you seriously suggesting we’ll drive on without a windshield?” Jjong asks back.

“Well, it’s an option and probably not the worst one. Anyway, let’s push the thing over and then we’ll see.”

We slip out of the car again dragging Minho with us. He’s still too dizzy to get up, but the bleeding has stopped, thank God.

The rest of us line up at the roof-side of the car and push. It’s surprisingly easy and with only a few times rocking back and forth we manage to get it back on the wheels.

“Okay”, Kibum says, and turning to Taemin “you try to get it going again. Jinki and I can check on the truck-driver.”

“Yeah, and put Minho back in the car”, I add, “Jjonggie too. And keep trying to call the police.”

Jjong wants to protest but since he has to admit that he will only slow us if he comes with us, he quickly backs down.

I set off with Kibum and while we’re struggling to get through the iced-over snow he says:

“Remind me to send Ari-chan a huge box of her favorite chocolates when we come back.”

“Sure ... why?”

He points at his feet:

“She gave me the mental strength to wear these abominations.”  

Like this story? Give it an Upvote!
Thank you!

Comments

You must be logged in to comment
dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')