dear God

48 hours

I'm sorry that I have neglected this for so long. I kinda didn't get into the flow anymore and after a while of procrastination it got even more difficult. I already considered deleting the story entirely but since a few of you have encouraged me to go on I thought I'd give it a try. Maybe I'll get back into it.

reference: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=upVKjjYBmEw  (around 10:00)

I love Key's hilarious reaction when Arisa tries to give him the uggs ^^

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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I must have fallen asleep shortly after the call because we’re standing at a gas station when I wake up again about an hour later with Taemin’s hair in my face. He is still in dreamland curled up against me, his head on my shoulder. Jjong’s Jacket is draped over both of us. He, Minho and Kibum have left the car and I try to spot them without moving too much to let our baby sleep.

Jjong and Minho are talking with a guy at the rent-a-car next to the small supermarket of the gas station. Yeah, it would be great to change vehicles not only because our current one is equipped with summer tires. I don’t see Kibum and shortly think he might be in the restroom to fix his make-up but then again he’s not THAT vain now ...  is he?

But then I see him coming out of the supermarket, a thick quilt-jacket draped over his arm and a shoebox stuck under the other.

Ah, right, he had to leave his baggage behind at the airport and wasn’t exactly dressed for the freezing temperatures.

He opens the door on the passenger side in the front and sits down.

“Don’t say anything or you die”, he snarls without looking at me and pulls a pair of uggs out of the shoe-box.

I have to smile anyway, remembering how much he hates those. It also reminds me of his sincerety. He keeps his promises even if it requires him to do something he loathes from the bottom of his heart.

When he has finished with the boots he puts on the quilted jacket as well and I see that it’s in fact a woman’s coat in red with pink applications.

“They didn’t have much to select from in the coat department now, did they?” I ask still smiling.

“What makes you think that?” Kibum asks back while nonchalantly putting his phone into one of the frilly pockets and then pulls a face at me in the rear mirror.

Minho and Jonghyun come back, Jjongie wrapping his arms around his chest in the cold.

“Out out out”, he says, “we got a different car.”

Seeing Kibum in his new outfit his eyes grow wide and he’s about to laugh but Key shuts him up with just a glance. Minho doesn’t even try to mock him.

The new car doesn’t only have appropriate tires, it’s also much bigger.

“Is that a Benz?” Taemin asks sleepily, “how much was that?”

“Ask Kibum about his shoes and I’ll tell you”, Jjong says.

“What?”

But we’re already in and Minho starts the car. Taemin doesn’t really care and snuggles up again, this time to Jjong who has moved with us into the back.

The heating of the Benz works well. I almost drift back to sleep when once again a phone rings. This time it’s Jjong’s.

“Oh ”, he says, “it’s the company.”

Although it was bound to happen we didn’t really think about what to do as soon as SMEnt executives got wind of our disappearance. They certainly found out already that we’re all missing and they probably know about Yoogeun as well.

“Don’t answer”, I suggest and Minho nods approval. The phone keeps ringing.

“Kibum?” Jjong asks.

“Yeah, don’t answer.”

“Taem?”

“Yeah.”

It’s sweet that he asks everybody I think, and yet again I’m ashamed of myself that being here in this car with all four of them makes me happy even though the occasion is rather desperate.

We decide not to answer any calls except for those with suppressed numbers for the time being. In the end we’ll have to do a lot of explaining anyway and right now we need to focus on saving Yoogeun.

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The snow has turned to rain when we pass Seocheon. We’ve managed half the distance without major difficulties but it’s getting dark already.

“What time is it?” Taemin asks waking up again, stretching.

I check my watch:

“4:20”, I tell him and immediately start to worry although we still got six hours left which should be sufficient to reach Mokpo. But then again we’ll have to find the right place there and even though we have GPS I’m not sure that ...

“Don’t worry, Hyung”, Taemin says and gives me one of his big soothing smiles, “we’ll make it.”

I seriously have to work on my facial expressions. It always gives it away when I’m concerned. Slightly embarrassed I pull out my phone when Minho suddenly steps hard on the brakes.

I only get a glimpse of an unlit truck diagonally on the road before we skid sideways, Minho desperately trying to avoid a collision but failing on the slippery surface. We crash into the guardrail and break through, toppling over. The last thing going through my mind before I lose consciousness is ‘oh dear God, please don’t let them die’.

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dibidibidis27 #1
Chapter 31: Waaaaaaah..... This is so good. This is actually the second story that you wrote that I've read. And just wanna say that I love both of them. I love how your stories revolve around SHINee's friendship and personalities, not just romance. And I also love that you relate them with things that really happened to SHINee in real life. Just like what you did in 'The Red Shoes' that you relatef with SWC IV, and now this, related to 'Hello Baby'. I really loooove you're stories, keep writing please.
Denkia #2
I love this ...... And I love how u wrote key character because I personally think that's how he is in real life. I really hate how people misunderstood him soo much. SHINee fighting
MissLocket #3
Chapter 31: This was soooo good. I am very happy with the ending. I was a bit scared for my Kibum, you know, but everything went fine considering the whole situation. You can't imagine how grateful I am you don't abandon the story. Please keep writing. You are pretty talented. I love your plots, storyline and how you portray characters, especially Key. He is so misunderstood and underappreciated that it hurts, so when authors like you dig deep in his persona and explore that side of him in such a beautiful way, I can only be happy.
TypicalAuthornim
#4
Chapter 31: I'll really miss this story, and I love this epilogue!!
Thanks author-nim ^-^
Jimmae #5
Chapter 31: It's sad that it's over but I'm really glad that the story turned out like this. I think every character was given what they were due. I'm really happy for this great story and I hope you would write more beautiful stories soon. Thank you very very much author-nim. ☺
dhinikeybum #6
Chapter 31: “I didn’t want them to take the sadness away. This is something I experienced and it is raw and it hurts. But it’s part of my life now and part of who I am. I don’t want to be repaired because I’m not broken, just changed.”

This...this...i feel warm inside...feel like he''s the one who say it. He accepted the reality not bcz he's the most brave out of five but he's willing to try and he just know its a part of his journey that cant be erase forever that make him grown mature and wiser and im surely the choice is not a regretful one...

Yeeaahhh typical kibum if he want something and if he make it up his mind, he wont change it and keep the promise no matter what happen next (just like the ugg boots). He dont like but willingly try. Somehow his decision make me proud and love him more. I learn much from the guy name Kim Kibum...

Upside down story but SHINee became more open and the family get warmer and onew wish granted^^

Thank you author nim for the hard work and see u in your next story^^
dhinikeybum #7
Chapter 31: Its sweet but end too soon :-(
Hope next time we can meet again in your other story.....


Uuuuuhhhhh i feel saaaaaaaaadddddddd :-(
TypicalAuthornim
#8
Chapter 30: The two are really hurt... but they'll heal soon.
Scars can take ime to heal... but they will heal for sure.
My mind is making up a story with this, am I allowed to make a story that's a bit like this? I mean, not the kidnapping, but the shot... can I?
Thanks for the update, author-nim. I'll miss your story :')